[LJ Idol 8x21] Intersection Week: "Bridge"

[dizzydog]

Note: This entry based on the prompt "Bridge" is part of an intersection with the wonderful and talented tigrkittn, and follows her entry based on "The Straw That Stirs the Drink". Please read her entry first ( found here) before reading mine!

Comments

[notodette]

I absolutely love the tone of this. Very Frank Miller, very noir. Incredibly done.

[dizzydog]

*dances* Thanks!! I had him in mind as I wrote the entry, and mentally I read it in Dwight's voice from Sin City to see if it sounded right to me :D

[jem0000000]

Great characterization -- I love the noir detective feel to the story, and the fantasy elements are wonderful. :)

[dizzydog]

Thanks again! Bel's project has had me thinking about how noir and fantasy could fit together, and really wanted to try my hand at it and see how it went :)

[basric]

Nice and creepy with just the right about of ickiness thrown in. I liked it. A lot.

[dizzydog]

Thanks! I think it might be fun to work with tigrkittn on expanding both halves some so we have more room to work the creepy in more :)

[jacq22]

Delightfully yucky, creepy and with a character I almost like...I said almost!

[dizzydog]

Thank you! "Almost" is all he's earned so far, we'll see if he ever gets to likable :D

[p_m_cryan]

Yay noir!

[dizzydog]

Yay! Thanks :D