HAHAHA! Hilarious! I think this would be a great entry. Crazy people at the old folks home. When my grandma used to work at the mental ward, she had to take care of someone like Reggie. Now she's at an old folks home herself.
Seriously. I was barking with laughter by the time I hit "Hahahaaaah! I think I peed!" :D
A unique spin on the topic, as expected. Two wonderful twists, which you've become known for. And funny as hell. "Stripper Tits!" "Viva Resistance!" *rolls on the bed, holding her stomach, with tears streaming down her face*
This was great! My only editorial comment would be to modify the sentence about the "elderly individuals seated on a cross between a couch and a long bench" ... It makes it sound like they are seated on a cross, if you see what I mean? Maybe just change it to "a long, padded bench".
Yay! And THANKS! I had a mental split in the sentence so it made sense to me, but after you pointed it out all I could picture is a bunch of grannys perched on the arms of a cross like crows :D Fixed!
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I used to run into people like this all the time on the bus and metro, so have a lot of real-life examples to model for me :D
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Seriously. I was barking with laughter by the time I hit "Hahahaaaah! I think I peed!" :D
A unique spin on the topic, as expected. Two wonderful twists, which you've become known for. And funny as hell. "Stripper Tits!" "Viva Resistance!" *rolls on the bed, holding her stomach, with tears streaming down her face*
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Otherwise, great job!
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