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[dizzy_edge]

I don't feel like my poetry flows anymore :( It feels so dry. I mean, I think I put the same amount of emotion in it as I always have. But, to me, it's not striking with as much emotion as I would like it to when I read it. Sorry this isn't a real update.

KEEP ME ASLEEP

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[hizollie]

beautiful.
"We'll walk through noon
And destroy hours alone
These moments are indescribable
Your mouth is unmistakable
Your lips, irresistible
We're unstoppable
Right now reach isn't restricted by distance
And your arms remind me not to fall asleep"

[dizzy_edge]

thank you... I'm glad you liked it :)

[dizzy_edge]

it's strange, I wrote this before I met you.

sorry... I just stumbled across it.

[hizollie]

yeah weird that you would say something like that too.

[dizzy_edge]

I don't think it's weird at all! man, you were a meanie back then!

Trying to dig up old poems from my LJ.