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[divvy]

a little less 16 candles, a little more touch me, 2006
the sacrifice of life; so long as we keep our bodies numb we're safe
travis / william, gabe / william, 6811 words (nc17)

-- here is why you're sad: you're miserable when he is close, so take another drink, another drink will numb those senses and make the most of flesh and bones if it helps

Comments

[ladykatherine14]

oooh, this is awesome!!!! i have a huge soft spot for well written vampire fic, and this is just perfect! i really like how you gave the background in past tense at the top, it works well to set it apart and set up the rest of the story.

now for a list of my favorite moments:
*bill and travis having sex to my chem, pure awesome!!!
*maja keeping mike for a week and bill not minding because he has so many others to keep his interest
*ryan being the true dandy, and the scarf-wearing!
*awesome dynamic within the "family" esp. between maja and gabe, as the parents of the house, but not
*shant covering for bill so he can stay with travie longer
*travie asking right away to be called travie
*his response to finding out that he's in love with a fucking vampire
*gabilliam shower sex is always a bonus

and what i really like is how well this fits into the 16 candles universe, and just has the right mood to it. i can't wait to find out what happens to get travie in another gang, and how pete will get involved, assuming you are following the plot of the video to some degree.

basically, i love this a whole lot and can't wait to see the next part. you rock!

<3

[divvy]

oh my gah you made a list

well first, thank you for loving this as intensely as i loved writing it. pete's involvement is going to be insane. this is going to be a fight club ending, only not, only as exciting as a fight club ending. whoa, i am letting the compliments get to my head that can't be good

also, i love shaant, i just. . . do

[ladykatherine14]

hehe, i did make a list, the awesomeness of this must have just overwhelmed me! looking forward to part two, especially pete!

[divvy]

all of this excitement for part two makes me want to post what i have written but it's not finished and i have work until 8 ahhh