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divia1431

Wish I had an Angel

Apr 15, 2007 22:19

Chapter 2 ( Read more... )

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anonymous April 16 2007, 02:49:46 UTC

“That’s untrue. The thing you desire most is to capture pirates. That is all you care about.” She saw his shoulders slouch, and for the first time in her life James Norrington did not look strong or confident.

His voice was barely audible. “I wish that were true.”

Best part EVER. PLEASE don't keep us in the dark! This is too good!

artic_fox April 16 2007, 05:47:40 UTC

Wow! I am LOVING this! I want to know what is going to happen. I like that you have tapped into the essential problem between Elizabeth and Norrington which is the fact that she does not sense emotion from him, and he is too scared to show it. I hope you continue this again soon!

flyingpigs_live April 16 2007, 13:50:12 UTC

Wow, I am definitely intrigued. Good job. :)

anonymous April 16 2007, 16:18:04 UTC

i can't wait for chapter three! this is great!

lizzie_sparrow April 16 2007, 16:32:26 UTC

I love this story! Post the next chapter soon! =]