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divas_lament

Release

Aug 15, 2008 22:06

John Winchester could not bear to live in Lawrence after the death of his wife. He would see her everywhere: at the grocery store, at the garage, at the park that they took the boys to on weekends… Everywhere he would be waiting for her but she never came. Dean had gotten quiet. Though they never talked about it, John could tell he was hurting. ( Read more... )

crossover: supernatural/smallville, ship: chloe/dean

Comments 28

pen37 August 16 2008, 02:39:41 UTC

woah!

And wow!

I saw the Chloe/Jimmy tag, and you had me worried for a minute.

divas_lament August 16 2008, 02:45:36 UTC

I hope those were good whoa/wows. xD

No need to fear on the Chloe/Jimmy front. Especially if there is a Chloe/Dean tag in the mix.

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divas_lament August 16 2008, 02:57:47 UTC

I'm not a Jimmy/Chloe fan at all, but the tag had to be included.

And I'm glad you liked it!

etamne August 16 2008, 03:03:56 UTC

Completely awesome! I also halted at the Chloe/Jimmy tag but then I thought to myself, "No. Be realistic. She wouldn't. It's safe to read."

However, 'safe' is not quite the adjective. I think 'torrid' is a little more appropriate. Oooohhh. Wedding to Jimmy in the morning, making it with Dean Winchester in the evening. I love!

divas_lament August 16 2008, 03:08:21 UTC

Of course I wouldn't. Maybe I should change the misleading tag. -ponders-

Hehe. Glad you liked! "Torrid" is a fun word. The almost wedding led to a pretty good wedding night, don't you think? xD

etamne August 16 2008, 04:25:46 UTC

VERY good wedding night! Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention that the backstory of Chloe and the Winchesters was AMAZING! It just fit. I loved every aspect, especially the fake wedding...so cute!

etamne August 16 2008, 04:27:20 UTC

P.S. - again - I love spunky grannies. (Especially ones who condone running from weddings to Jimmy...)

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fonapola August 16 2008, 04:53:18 UTC

Double wammy, nice job!

*applauds*

Ya done good, girl :D

divas_lament August 16 2008, 16:28:59 UTC

Whoo! Thanks! :D The prompts were fun!

svgurl August 16 2008, 07:41:00 UTC

Did a double take at the Chloe/Jimmy tag like everyone else but I saw the Chloe/Dean that followed and knew it would all be okay. :D

I'm so glad that Chloe realized that she wasn't ready to get married. And yay for running into Dean! :D

“What about you?”

“What about me?”

“You look like you’ve been to hell and back.”

“Perceptive,” he replied, with a hint of mirth in his voice.

Love the dialogue!

Great work! :D

divas_lament August 16 2008, 16:31:01 UTC

Thanks! :D