SOMEDAY, *Your RAINBOW* *WILL* *Come Smiling Through* 3
anonymous
October 15 2016, 15:38:03 UTC
It is NOT *JUST* *Cindy* who finds budding romance at the Prince's ball, however. Once Anastasia has finished talking with the King, she discovers that she is *VERY thirsty* from all of the talking she has done, and so makes her way to the punch bowl. It takes not THREE, but *FOUR cups of pineapple-peach-raspberry punch* before her thirst is *somewhat* sated; Anastasia fervently hopes that this *does NOT* make her look greedy! "Those punch cups ARE *REALLY* *pretty*, but they're SO *small* at the same time, aren't they? Don't you wish that they could be JUST *a BIT* *bigger*, or what; *ESPECIALLY* when you're REALLY, *REALLY thirsty*!" Anastasia suddenly whirls around, startled that someone else said the VERY thing that she was *just* thinking to herself. ...And then upon locking eyes with the female person who spoke these thoughts, she *STOPS thinking* *ALTOGETHER* to a point. The other *BEAUTIFUL* young girl about her own age is shorter than Anastasia (the top of her head coming up to Anastasia's collarbone) with long partially held-back warm brown hair that is topped with a gold tiara-esque circlet studded with diamond-esque crystals, emeralds, and rubies, smooth fair skin ever-so-lightly kissed by the sun and adorned with freckles on the bridge of her button nose, a slenderly-thin build blessed with generous-enough curves where ANASTASIA'S is *not*, full and soft rose-pink lips (and a VERY *slight* gap between her two front teeth), and big emerald-green orbs for eyes fringed with long dark thick eyelashes. She is wearing a simple yet very pretty pink puff-sleeved gown trimmed here and there with white embroidery, and matching pink satin slippers; her only accessory is the crown-like circlet on her head, and her warm smile is genuine, reaching *ALL the way* up to her sparkling verdant eyes as it lights up not only her beautiful face, but her *ENTIRE* *being*. All Anastasia can think of to say without sounding/seeming like a dunderhead or creep is, "-Yes; it IS *VERY annoying*, isn't it?" The beautiful girl with brown hair and green eyes hummed in agreement before offering her hand and saying in a friendly tone, "I'm Rapunzel Amanda Solell. Who are you, desperately thirsty stranger?" Anastasia gives a soft laugh at this, slightly blushing, and takes Rapunzel's smaller, more delicate yet slightly callused hand in her own and gives it a firm, gentle shake while saying with a genuinely warm smile of her own, "I am Anastasia Lucille Tremaine; -but please call me 'Stacy'. I... like it better that way." Rapunzel does not press; only widens (and brightens) her smile into practically a GRIN as she returns the handshake with, "*'Stacy'* it is, then!" - Two months later, there is a *DOUBLE wedding* at the castle of the King between Anastasia ('Stacy') Lucille Browne and Rapunzel Amanda Solell as well as Prince Charles Charming and Cinderella ('Cinderelly' or 'Cindy') Ilene Browne. The only wedding guests *NOT invited* are Stacy's former mother Eleanor Rodmilla Tremaine and Drizella Rhoda Tremaine, as they are currently serving time in one of the Royal Palace's prison cells for their cruel treatment towards Princess Cinderella.
Oh, Anastasia. I wasn't expecting the Anastasia/Rapunzel, but it worked so well, and I really liked how she took in those little details of Rapunzel's appearance, like the little gap between her front teeth, that make it feel more real and perfect for its reality instead.
It was really nice to see Anastasia being the one to step up and deal with her mother and sister as well! (God, I really need to work on my own BAMF!Anastasia fic, her character is so amazing in the third film especially.) The canon divergence worked really well, there.
One thing I might suggest, though? On LJ, you can use < i > or < b > for italics or bold for emphasis; it can be easier to read than ** on things, as the asterisks can be a little bit overwhelming. :)
RE: Re: SOMEDAY, *Your RAINBOW* *WILL* *Come Smiling Through* 3
anonymous
October 17 2016, 03:20:36 UTC
I thought at first of using Princess Anna, but then Mr. Plot-Bunny switched on me. And I'm glad that you liked those little details I added in; I try to use them in my stories whenever I possibly can.
I *know*, RIGHT?!? I just COULDN'T *BEAR* to *go CANON* there, so I slipped into alternate universe. (Sounds like a plan-!)
(BLUSH)!!! *Oops*-!! Sorry; okay, I'll remember THAT in the future.
"Those punch cups ARE *REALLY* *pretty*, but they're SO *small* at the same time, aren't they? Don't you wish that they could be JUST *a BIT* *bigger*, or what; *ESPECIALLY* when you're REALLY, *REALLY thirsty*!"
Anastasia suddenly whirls around, startled that someone else said the VERY thing that she was *just* thinking to herself. ...And then upon locking eyes with the female person who spoke these thoughts, she *STOPS thinking* *ALTOGETHER* to a point.
The other *BEAUTIFUL* young girl about her own age is shorter than Anastasia (the top of her head coming up to Anastasia's collarbone) with long partially held-back warm brown hair that is topped with a gold tiara-esque circlet studded with diamond-esque crystals, emeralds, and rubies, smooth fair skin ever-so-lightly kissed by the sun and adorned with freckles on the bridge of her button nose, a slenderly-thin build blessed with generous-enough curves where ANASTASIA'S is *not*, full and soft rose-pink lips (and a VERY *slight* gap between her two front teeth), and big emerald-green orbs for eyes fringed with long dark thick eyelashes. She is wearing a simple yet very pretty pink puff-sleeved gown trimmed here and there with white embroidery, and matching pink satin slippers; her only accessory is the crown-like circlet on her head, and her warm smile is genuine, reaching *ALL the way* up to her sparkling verdant eyes as it lights up not only her beautiful face, but her *ENTIRE* *being*.
All Anastasia can think of to say without sounding/seeming like a dunderhead or creep is, "-Yes; it IS *VERY annoying*, isn't it?"
The beautiful girl with brown hair and green eyes hummed in agreement before offering her hand and saying in a friendly tone, "I'm Rapunzel Amanda Solell. Who are you, desperately thirsty stranger?"
Anastasia gives a soft laugh at this, slightly blushing, and takes Rapunzel's smaller, more delicate yet slightly callused hand in her own and gives it a firm, gentle shake while saying with a genuinely warm smile of her own, "I am Anastasia Lucille Tremaine; -but please call me 'Stacy'. I... like it better that way."
Rapunzel does not press; only widens (and brightens) her smile into practically a GRIN as she returns the handshake with, "*'Stacy'* it is, then!"
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Two months later, there is a *DOUBLE wedding* at the castle of the King between Anastasia ('Stacy') Lucille Browne and Rapunzel Amanda Solell as well as Prince Charles Charming and Cinderella ('Cinderelly' or 'Cindy') Ilene Browne. The only wedding guests *NOT invited* are Stacy's former mother Eleanor Rodmilla Tremaine and Drizella Rhoda Tremaine, as they are currently serving time in one of the Royal Palace's prison cells for their cruel treatment towards Princess Cinderella.
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It was really nice to see Anastasia being the one to step up and deal with her mother and sister as well! (God, I really need to work on my own BAMF!Anastasia fic, her character is so amazing in the third film especially.) The canon divergence worked really well, there.
One thing I might suggest, though? On LJ, you can use < i > or < b > for italics or bold for emphasis; it can be easier to read than ** on things, as the asterisks can be a little bit overwhelming. :)
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I *know*, RIGHT?!? I just COULDN'T *BEAR* to *go CANON* there, so I slipped into alternate universe. (Sounds like a plan-!)
(BLUSH)!!! *Oops*-!! Sorry; okay, I'll remember THAT in the future.
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