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The Distraction Game {2/2} afterandalasia April 28 2011, 11:51:51 UTC
Hot desire flickers in the sorcerer's eyes. Aladdin is not sure that he can hold the gaze much longer under that lecherous leer, but mercifully--

"Al! Al, what are you doing? You--"

"Go away, Genie!" Aladdin snaps. The Genie looks shocked as he gestures away, over behind Jafar, but the sorcerer looks impressed. A good thing too, seeing as it means he doesn't notice that Aladdin is pointing to Jasmine, now getting slowly to her feet, watching Jafar carefully and Aladdin with vague disgust and horror. Pain on his blue face, the Genie starts to move away, then when he sees the now unchained princess he give a wink and flits over to her, starting to whisper something in her ear.

He turns back to the vizier-now-Sultan.

"Jafar, I needed to see you, to tell you. As Sultan..."

Slowly, cautiously, Aladdin rises to his feet. He is dressed like a street rat again, as he was when Jafar first saw him, and he can see the dark eyes devouring his bare chest, his toned arms.

He whispers: "It's so much more now that you're Sultan."

Jafar smirks. That cocky expression across his face. But with shaking hands Aladdin steps forward, tilting his hips so that his body arches up towards Jafar in some imitation of a woman, uncertainly putting his hands on Jafar's shoulders. For a moment the smirk fades, wariness coming into Jafar's expression, and desperately Aladdin continues.

"I had to come back, Jafar." His name tastes bad on Aladdin's tongue, but the boy forces it from his lips all the same. "I had to come back here," he drops the word, as behind Jafar he can just see Jasmine started to walk towards them. "To take hold of the opportunity."

Jasmine stops to remove her shoes, which are noisy, but they drop to the floor from her fumbling hand. At the sound Jafar is about to turn, when Aladdin grabs him desperately and forces a kiss on the vizier's mouth, blanching at the taste of sweat and wine, desperately forcing his tongue between Jafar's lips. Cracking open one eye, he sees Jasmine break into a run, and the start of a smile that comes to his face is genuine as Jafar pulls away and looks at him in utter astonishment.

"Why, street rat, I would not have thought it of you."

How can he not notice Jasmine, right behind him, her hands scooping around the lamp and her eyes turning desperately to Genie for guidance?

"Go on. Say it aloud."

The smile broadens on Aladdin's face, and the street rat is back in business. A moment too late, Jafar must realise his mistake as horror spreads across his expression and he goes to turn, raising the staff.

"Got you this time, Jafar."

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} guiltyhousewife April 28 2011, 20:33:39 UTC
So it took me, no joke, four times to read this, because every time I would get to a particularly good part, I'd get all overexcited and screechy, and would have to slam shut the laptop to avoid suspicion, lol.

In any case, no one needs to buy me any presents this year, birthday or Christmas, because I have this. SOOOOOOO good. It's like drinking hot chocolate, it's so satisfying! Love it!

Man, I can just imagine the conversation after the happy ending wrap up...

Jasmine, "So um....what the hell was that back there?"
Aladdin, "Erm..."

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} afterandalasia April 28 2011, 22:20:46 UTC
Loooool, so glad that you're happy! ^^ I'm sorry as well that it took me so long to get around to this, good lord...

(Wonder if that conversation leads to Jasmine's yaoi fangirl thing...)

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} guiltyhousewife April 29 2011, 00:38:05 UTC
Man, if it wasn't so terribly pathetic, I'd fill my own prompt, just to see that idea come to life! Lol.

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} afterandalasia April 29 2011, 07:33:25 UTC
WHAT?! What did I miss? "Jasmine's yaoi fangirl thing"?

And to the writer: GREAT JOB I LOVED IT AND WAS SQUEELING IN DELIGHT TOO

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} afterandalasia April 29 2011, 09:12:53 UTC
The yaoi fangirl thing is another prompt by the same prompter. XD Here, sadly unfilled so far.

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} guiltyhousewife April 30 2011, 22:18:12 UTC
I almost expected to read "crazy" or "disturbed" before "prompter". Lol

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} guiltyhousewife April 30 2011, 22:17:37 UTC
Maybe we should gang up on afterandalasia until she fills it. I'll poke her Monday through Thursday, you get weekends. Lol.

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Re: The Distraction Game {2/2} guiltyhousewife June 23 2011, 22:34:46 UTC
Second that!

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