You know I don’t generally write het. Actually, I never write het. I think this is my first. So this was interesting. Also, I’m not fully pleased with it, and it's kind of not quite what you wanted, but hopefully you like it anyway? <3
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Shang watched his bride-to-be as she played with the children from town, teaching them how to be strong and brave like her. He knew he wanted as many children as they could possibly have; she’d be a wonderful mother to them all.
And yet …
He missed Ping. Sure, at first he’d been unnerved that he was thinking about a man like that, but when he found out that Ping was really a girl, it was sort of a letdown. Shang didn’t know why he felt so torn about it. On the one hand, he’d spent his nights dreaming about a girl, which was good.
On the other hand, he’d spent his nights dreaming about a girl he thought was a boy. He’d imagined hard muscles beneath his hands, slim, sharp hips to grab as he thrust into Ping’s willing body. Not the soft curves of a girl-if he wanted that, he could go to any brothel in any town!
But Ping-Mulan--was different. She was almost like a man, Shang reasoned. She was certainly as strong, if not stronger, than most of the men he’d trained for battle. Her body didn’t have the voluptuous curves of a woman, nor did she have the soft spoken manner a proper wife should have.
If Shang were honest with himself, it was Mulan’s boyish manner that still drew him to her. He’d asked her to marry him on a whim of sorts. Shang loved her-at least, in the way a man who knows his duty is to wed could love. He dreamed of their wedding night, of turning her over and taking her from behind and pretending she were Ping.
She’d fight him for control, of course-he couldn’t imagine his fiancée taking anything lying down, and sex would be no exception. The thought of Mulan fighting for dominance was strangely erotic, and he’d hold her down, delighting in her barely-there breasts as he took her innocence. He’d grip her hips, bad for childbearing, but perfect for the slender body Shang craved to possess. Idly, Shang wondered if the priests would consider taking his wife from behind as unlawful.
He watched her for a few more minutes, laughing as Sha-Ron managed to hit her in the shin with her stick, then turned to leave. He’d spent too long engrossed in his thoughts, not enough time getting used to the reality that his soon-to-be wife only looked and acted masculine; she was most certainly not a man.
So, in this context, I'm not a fan of the terminology 'take her from behind' but this was amazing and I'm not even sure there's a better way to put it.
EEEEEEE! Sorry my reply is so late, was busy with uni work. This is WONDERFUL! I like this bit best:
The thought of Mulan fighting for dominance was strangely erotic, and he’d hold her down, delighting in her barely-there breasts as he took her innocence. He’d grip her hips, bad for childbearing, but perfect for the slender body Shang craved to possess. Idly, Shang wondered if the priests would consider taking his wife from behind as unlawful.
I was pretty sure that's why you hadn't replied yet--how's everything going with that? I poked around your lj, about how you're going for apprenticeship (or something to that effect) and exams and stuff ...
^__^ I am still rather stressed with uni (things will only get worse, such is the nature of Medical school, sigh) but otherwise doing ok. Thanks for asking. ♥
....Is it wrong that I want more Mulan porn? What is it about that movie. T___T
I'll stick with my Anthropology, thanks. Not so stressful--I'm actually over halfway done with my degree requirements after one year. :D
I'm glad you're at least managing! Also the marriage-y stuff. I know Heim (kei_rin, you met her at Az)'s parents are kind of hinting on that front, too, and Heim just ignores them and hopes they'll forget. They haven't yet. ^^;;
If it helps, I'm debating writing the other Mulan prompt from here as it is, lol. It just kind of begs for it. Also, het. Just. What. Haha.
I'll try and get something porny whipped up for you, mmkay?
For being a short piece that is entirely introspective, this is pretty hot. I liked the third to last paragraph a lot, very much with the hotness there.
So yes, I can report back that you ROCK at het. :D
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Shang watched his bride-to-be as she played with the children from town, teaching them how to be strong and brave like her. He knew he wanted as many children as they could possibly have; she’d be a wonderful mother to them all.
And yet …
He missed Ping. Sure, at first he’d been unnerved that he was thinking about a man like that, but when he found out that Ping was really a girl, it was sort of a letdown. Shang didn’t know why he felt so torn about it. On the one hand, he’d spent his nights dreaming about a girl, which was good.
On the other hand, he’d spent his nights dreaming about a girl he thought was a boy. He’d imagined hard muscles beneath his hands, slim, sharp hips to grab as he thrust into Ping’s willing body. Not the soft curves of a girl-if he wanted that, he could go to any brothel in any town!
But Ping-Mulan--was different. She was almost like a man, Shang reasoned. She was certainly as strong, if not stronger, than most of the men he’d trained for battle. Her body didn’t have the voluptuous curves of a woman, nor did she have the soft spoken manner a proper wife should have.
If Shang were honest with himself, it was Mulan’s boyish manner that still drew him to her. He’d asked her to marry him on a whim of sorts. Shang loved her-at least, in the way a man who knows his duty is to wed could love. He dreamed of their wedding night, of turning her over and taking her from behind and pretending she were Ping.
She’d fight him for control, of course-he couldn’t imagine his fiancée taking anything lying down, and sex would be no exception. The thought of Mulan fighting for dominance was strangely erotic, and he’d hold her down, delighting in her barely-there breasts as he took her innocence. He’d grip her hips, bad for childbearing, but perfect for the slender body Shang craved to possess. Idly, Shang wondered if the priests would consider taking his wife from behind as unlawful.
He watched her for a few more minutes, laughing as Sha-Ron managed to hit her in the shin with her stick, then turned to leave. He’d spent too long engrossed in his thoughts, not enough time getting used to the reality that his soon-to-be wife only looked and acted masculine; she was most certainly not a man.
And that, he decided, was the best part.
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(OMG I KNOW!!!! :D )
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I heart it so!!!
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So, in this context, I'm not a fan of the terminology 'take her from behind' but this was amazing and I'm not even sure there's a better way to put it.
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But I'm glad you liked it! <3
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The thought of Mulan fighting for dominance was strangely erotic, and he’d hold her down, delighting in her barely-there breasts as he took her innocence. He’d grip her hips, bad for childbearing, but perfect for the slender body Shang craved to possess. Idly, Shang wondered if the priests would consider taking his wife from behind as unlawful.
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I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! <3 Yay! Thank you!
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....Is it wrong that I want more Mulan porn? What is it about that movie. T___T
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I'm glad you're at least managing! Also the marriage-y stuff. I know Heim (kei_rin, you met her at Az)'s parents are kind of hinting on that front, too, and Heim just ignores them and hopes they'll forget. They haven't yet. ^^;;
If it helps, I'm debating writing the other Mulan prompt from here as it is, lol. It just kind of begs for it. Also, het. Just. What. Haha.
I'll try and get something porny whipped up for you, mmkay?
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So yes, I can report back that you ROCK at het. :D
\o/ *hugs*
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How's your Friday look for Costco-ing? Mine's totally free.
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