One Last Request 3/3promisemewingsJanuary 3 2011, 17:44:38 UTC
Her hands moved down his lean midsection and down to his baggy pants, swiftly working at the wound-up piece of fabric keeping them up. He was already at attention, his cock throbbing in anticipation. She wrapped one of her dainty hands around his manhood and stroked it a few times before slowly lowering herself down on him.
Their hips rocked together as Aladdin tried very hard to keep quiet. It was a very awkward position for him to be in, with a sexy and willing princess on top of him gratifying him sexually and being unable to reciprocate properly. Curse these chains! Oh, the things he would do to her if he had been unshackled...things he could probably do better than any selfish prince she was required to marry. In his mind, he imagined the two of them transported far away from the dungeon...on a magnificent, sumptuous bed in the palace, covered in silk sheets and pillows, the two of them wrapped together in ecstatic paradise...and he would be able to run his hands all along her supple body and soft skin, hold her close with his arms, lovingly kiss her. She wouldn't have to be the one hurriedly doing all the work, grinding her nubile body against his. She shouldn't have to be doing all the work. He wanted to be a man, dammit, and let her be the one receiving.
Aladdin wasn't complaining, though. Jasmine seemed to know what she was doing. She kept running her soft hands all over his roughened body and through his thick hair, easing whatever pain he had. They had managed to scoot themselves so his body was against the cold prison wall and his hands had better access to wrap around her silken shoulders and at least be able to touch her luscious breasts.
In between grunts, he said, "You deserve better than this, Jasmine."
"So do you," she responded, looking down at Aladdin, black hair falling around the two of them like a dark waterfall. Not much later, he felt himself getting ready to climax when the rattling of the prison door disturbed them.
Jasmine cursed. She hadn't even been able to properly come. She put her hand over Aladdin's mouth as he loudly grunted his satisfaction. His muscles tensed up and he struggled against the chains keeping him in his place.
She quickly removed herself from straddling him, helped get his pants back on, and got her commoner garb back on.
"Jasmine, I'm sorry that couldn't have been better for you," Aladdin said.
"Don't worry. It was the best I could do," Jasmine responded. She gave him one last kiss on the lips. "I really wish I could have done more for you."
"Take care, my princess," Aladdin said.
Jasmine quietly left the prison. Aladdin tried to be content, but it did him no good. He sat in the dark and waited for his fate until his monkey friend showed up.
Re: One Last Request 3/3fennelwinkJanuary 3 2011, 21:55:52 UTC
Amazing! I'm glad you had that bit of hope there at the end or I would have been really sad. This is so good it could easily be part of a full length fic. Heck, I keep staring at it, waiting for more to appear. Fantastic job. I look forward to more stories from you, whatever they may be. Seriously, are you on FF.net or some such?
Re: One Last Request 3/3promisemewingsJanuary 3 2011, 22:02:18 UTC
I'm registered on Ff.net, but I haven't uploaded anything on there yet. :D
I will admit, I did want to expand on this and make it a little longer and more detailed, but I was a little pressed for time. So I MAY add on to it and re-upload it on there. I also have done another fill on here that I posted anonymously and now I kind of wish I hadn't!
Re: One Last Request 3/3fennelwinkJanuary 4 2011, 09:54:20 UTC
Do iiit! Take some time and make a full story of it, it deserves it. I'm not even a big Aladdin fan and I loved it. Any fill we should look at then?
I hear ya on FF.net. I swear I have an account there just to save my favorites. Should you expand on your wonderful story, what should we look you up under?
Their hips rocked together as Aladdin tried very hard to keep quiet. It was a very awkward position for him to be in, with a sexy and willing princess on top of him gratifying him sexually and being unable to reciprocate properly. Curse these chains! Oh, the things he would do to her if he had been unshackled...things he could probably do better than any selfish prince she was required to marry. In his mind, he imagined the two of them transported far away from the dungeon...on a magnificent, sumptuous bed in the palace, covered in silk sheets and pillows, the two of them wrapped together in ecstatic paradise...and he would be able to run his hands all along her supple body and soft skin, hold her close with his arms, lovingly kiss her. She wouldn't have to be the one hurriedly doing all the work, grinding her nubile body against his. She shouldn't have to be doing all the work. He wanted to be a man, dammit, and let her be the one receiving.
Aladdin wasn't complaining, though. Jasmine seemed to know what she was doing. She kept running her soft hands all over his roughened body and through his thick hair, easing whatever pain he had. They had managed to scoot themselves so his body was against the cold prison wall and his hands had better access to wrap around her silken shoulders and at least be able to touch her luscious breasts.
In between grunts, he said, "You deserve better than this, Jasmine."
"So do you," she responded, looking down at Aladdin, black hair falling around the two of them like a dark waterfall. Not much later, he felt himself getting ready to climax when the rattling of the prison door disturbed them.
Jasmine cursed. She hadn't even been able to properly come. She put her hand over Aladdin's mouth as he loudly grunted his satisfaction. His muscles tensed up and he struggled against the chains keeping him in his place.
She quickly removed herself from straddling him, helped get his pants back on, and got her commoner garb back on.
"Jasmine, I'm sorry that couldn't have been better for you," Aladdin said.
"Don't worry. It was the best I could do," Jasmine responded. She gave him one last kiss on the lips. "I really wish I could have done more for you."
"Take care, my princess," Aladdin said.
Jasmine quietly left the prison. Aladdin tried to be content, but it did him no good. He sat in the dark and waited for his fate until his monkey friend showed up.
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I will admit, I did want to expand on this and make it a little longer and more detailed, but I was a little pressed for time. So I MAY add on to it and re-upload it on there. I also have done another fill on here that I posted anonymously and now I kind of wish I hadn't!
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I hear ya on FF.net. I swear I have an account there just to save my favorites. Should you expand on your wonderful story, what should we look you up under?
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