Hi Adam,
Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. Thanks for submitting "Tasteless" for consideration for inclusion on Corners of Darkness. I thought it was a great story! The only weak part of the story I thought was actually the first sentence. I didn't really feel that it did anything to strengthen the story and tends to give away the ending a bit. I thought I might suggest deleting this one line. The rest of the story I thought was perfect, very chilling and kept the reader wanting to know what's going to happen next, and the ending was perfect (I did add one line at the very end that I thought helped to wrap it up nicely. I don't usually edit stories for the site except for grammar but I couldn't help myself. Check it out, if you don't like it, feel free to cuss me out). Anyway I would love to include the story on the site. You can preview it at the following url:
http://www.horrorseek.com/horror/cod/tasteless.html I haven't placed a link to it on the main stories page yet. I wanted to ask you your thoughts on the first line, also I'm planning several updates to the site early next week and wanted to save the story and post the link to it then. Thanks again. And if you have any questions please feel free to email me at cornersofdarkness@darksites.com . If you have any other stories I would love to read them.
As always,
Immerse yourself in the Darkness.
Rob
Corners of Darkness
this was from a website I entered a story in. It feels good not to be rejected haha. I was wishing that I would have a few rejection letters to hang up but this is a little better hahaha