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Drabble Challenge - Ulrike

Apr 13, 2008 19:30

UlrikeSmiles on faces, teeth flashing white in the shadows of the basement, and laughter. The men circled her, eyes mocking, taunting, promising pain and humiliation and blood. Oh, they would hurt her, and they would take joy in it, and she would end up broken. This she knew ( Read more... )

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schnuffi April 13 2008, 20:17:29 UTC

That was intense! And I took great pleasure in her pain and defeat. Mainly because my bitchy colleague at work's also called Ulrike. Thanks for picking up the prompt too! Those white teeth flashing in the dark... *shudders pleasantly*

byslantedlight April 13 2008, 20:33:58 UTC

You're not watching Pros!

But thank you! *g*

schnuffi April 13 2008, 20:41:19 UTC

Yes I do! But I sneak out when the bitch talks cause I can't stand her. And I can do multitasking!

draycevixen April 13 2008, 23:02:52 UTC

You manage to pack an enormous amount of tension and anger into only 100 words. Well done!

Thank you!

callistosh65 April 14 2008, 03:22:41 UTC

Great interpretation of the prompt, I love all that tension and rage.

londonronnie April 14 2008, 20:04:48 UTC

Nice use of your prompt - definitely shark-like... *g*

A thought-provoking 100 words. Nicely done.