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milomaus December 9 2011, 09:05:47 UTC
Hits the button!
I love the title, the rescue and Murphy killing the highnote!
And the mood you created, just so wonderfully weihnachtlich! I really need that, we have rainstorms and it´s more like autumn right now....wish we had snow.

Thank you so much for this early christmas present!

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dawnebeth December 9 2011, 16:08:27 UTC
Aw. thanks! That first line just came to me and I had to run with it. *eg*

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snailbones December 9 2011, 13:09:04 UTC


Oh oh oh! You've totally turned me to mush *g*

It's a delight all the way through, with a princess thrown in for good measure.

Ta muchly for the lovely pressie. ♥

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dawnebeth December 9 2011, 16:09:29 UTC
Thank you! Have to have a princess in a rescue story--even when ultimately, they are rescuing themselves.

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merentha13 December 9 2011, 13:09:41 UTC
Lovely! I should be mad at you though, for making me tear up before my morning coffee -
"I'd have held that Raymond's hand," Bodie said softly, seeing reflections of the flame in Doyle's eyes. The nostalgia of the season was truly affecting him adversely. "And walked home after church with him."

Thank you for this!

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dawnebeth December 9 2011, 16:12:03 UTC
No, don't be mad! Just helping you clean your lachrymal ducts. That Bodie got inordinately mushy, didn't he?

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roven75 December 9 2011, 19:33:51 UTC
I'm getting into the Christmas spirit slowly this year, but I'm certainly in the mood for carols now *g* Thanks for a lovely story!

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dawnebeth December 9 2011, 19:41:26 UTC
Then my work is done--because I like to sing Christmas carols all year long. (yes, it does drive my friends crazy. Why do you ask? ;-)

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etain_antrim December 10 2011, 00:32:09 UTC
Very, very good! I liked the singing (both on and off key), Bodie's and Doyle's winsome way with Lady Veronica, and the love so clear at the end.

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dawnebeth December 10 2011, 02:07:09 UTC
merci! I am sure Bodie and Doyle just warbled the night away with Christmas carols and did nothing else, yeah? ;-)

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