Comments | discoveredinalj: Discovered at a Wedding: Ties by PFL

msmoat in discoveredinalj

Discovered at a Wedding: Ties by PFL

Jul 15, 2009 10:18

And squeaking in, just under the deadline.... I think this is a feel good sort of story. I hope you all agree!

( Ties )

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grey853 July 15 2009, 16:35:16 UTC

Oh, I really like how you went with this, having the wedding and Doyle thinking about partnership and what it all means. Lovely and well done.

msmoat July 15 2009, 17:34:26 UTC

Thank you! It was a gentle story, really, with them just...working some things out and coming together. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

gritsinmisery July 15 2009, 19:50:01 UTC

Oh. Wow. That was just... wonderful. You've got quiet & gentle and incredibly HOT in the same fic. *sighs with happiness*

msmoat July 15 2009, 20:11:47 UTC

Well, I had hoped to write a feel good sort of story. So, yay! *g* It seems to have worked. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for letting me know. ::smiles happily::

beledibabe July 15 2009, 20:09:21 UTC

Oh, wonderful! I love it when the penny drops for Doyle, and Bodie's wariness fighting his need.

Brava!

msmoat July 15 2009, 20:14:45 UTC

Oh, hello! I'm going to be seeing you this weekend, aren't I? Yay!

This, I admit, was a fun story to write. Because they were basically enjoying themselves, with just a bit of figuring things out so they can be happy together. As they should be. I wanted to write a comfort story. *g*

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

scherwood July 15 2009, 20:45:59 UTC

I'm glad you had time to finish it, I love it! :D
That was cute and serious at the same time.
And I love how Ray feels when Bodie show up, and Bodie's feelings at the end.
Thanx much for shring this with us! *hugs* :D

msmoat July 16 2009, 03:30:17 UTC

Yes, I don't think I can do just lighthearted. *g* So there were some serious undertones here, and the possibility that it might not work out...but you know it will.

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

constant_muse July 15 2009, 21:46:08 UTC

'it seemed as if hundreds of eyes were fastened on him. He thought wistfully about declaring an emergency evacuation, but cleared his throat instead.'

hee hee. I love way Doyle the CI5 agent keeps appearing, and Bodie's dramatic appearance in the middle of a fight Doyle's losing. And the lads flirting at the head table...

You do feel good so well.

msmoat July 16 2009, 03:31:41 UTC

Oh, good, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I definitely wanted to write a comfort story. Just the two of them, gradually realizing that, yes, they need and want to be with each other for the rest of their lives. We need those kinds of stories now and again, don't we?

Thank you!