OK Umm I am a Loser
Ok I am going to do something so stero-typical of live journal-ers(?)..(It is now a word)
I am going to Put the Poem we had to do in english with the 6 words
Tell me how you really feel what you liked what you didn't I can take it (Strong Zander...Strong Zander **weeps** )
Here goes:
Glistening and burgundy, apples
The color seems to drip
my touch brings color
to cascade off the fruit
across veins and over eyes
as a box cutter to my reality
cutting away rational
his name shimmering across synapscies
A glint off a meat cleaver
Come awake in the parking garage
“Caleb?”
My six words were 1. meat cleaver 2. caleb 3. touch 4. apple 5. box cutter 6. parking garage
If you want to see the first 4 lines of my sonet comment that you would like to see them
I am going to Put the Poem we had to do in english with the 6 words
Tell me how you really feel what you liked what you didn't I can take it (Strong Zander...Strong Zander **weeps** )
Here goes:
Glistening and burgundy, apples
The color seems to drip
my touch brings color
to cascade off the fruit
across veins and over eyes
as a box cutter to my reality
cutting away rational
his name shimmering across synapscies
A glint off a meat cleaver
Come awake in the parking garage
“Caleb?”
My six words were 1. meat cleaver 2. caleb 3. touch 4. apple 5. box cutter 6. parking garage
If you want to see the first 4 lines of my sonet comment that you would like to see them