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[EXO] i fear, i fear, 'twill prove a giddy world

Jul 15, 2012 21:26

i fear, i fear, 'twill prove a giddy world | exo | jongin/kyungsoo | pg-13 | 3000~
jongin leaps, and slowly (but surely) falls apart
written for aideshou 's second challenge! prompt used: both

( The world looks different, infinitely different, when it is tilted, when the buildings reach towards left rather than to the sky. )

fandom: exo, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, rating: pg-13

Comments 42

emo_what97 July 15 2012, 13:43:31 UTC

SPOTTING HERE BECAUSE <3

emo_what97 July 15 2012, 13:53:49 UTC

Like so um, wow you are amazing and i love you and ENDING IS PERFECT OKAY YOU DIDN'T EVEN HAVE TO FRET ABOUT IT

your writing style is always <3 ;~; and i just love how you made their characters and i see you sehan okay

let me love you always flops on you

cries you just reminded me of fic exchange fic I MUST FINISH THAT TOO

feixing July 17 2012, 13:30:57 UTC

sobs i am glad you liked it? you know how jittery and unsure i was about this piece ;~; ♥
you are too nice and yes sehan ofc sehan i want to write the taoris story to this 'verse I GOT IDEAS omg.
i love you more always always

♥ yes we need finish that both of us.

emo_what97 July 18 2012, 03:39:53 UTC

it was beautiful alright :)
YES TAORIS PLEASE FLAWLESS VERSE WILL EQUAL EQUALLY FLAWLESS TAORIS
rolls in all the love and you <3

haha :3 gonna write this weekend since Saturday class got cancelled. and whatever you do will be amazing so jiayou! <3

envybleedsgreen July 15 2012, 21:46:51 UTC

I, um, really can't don't know I just, my brain feels fried right now. Like, I am literally so awestruck I can't think of any words to show my feelings for this and just, RACHAEL.

feixing July 17 2012, 13:32:01 UTC

awh omg you are too nice ;~; and i am sorry i fried your brain ♥
YOU ARE TOO NICE, but thank you always always

♥

envybleedsgreen July 18 2012, 04:05:41 UTC

I AM NOT TOO NICE. I AM JUST SHOWING MY FEELINGS. T_T

seulpeo July 16 2012, 04:36:45 UTC

SCREECHES WAIT I HAVE TO READ THIS WHY DID YOU NOT TELL ME THIS WAS POSTED
R A C H A E L

THIS IS A SPOT

seulpeo December 27 2012, 03:40:32 UTC

it....took me half a year but here i am? sorry i am the worst.

but wow w o w i literally like everything about this, i want to inhale this world and everything about it (jongin). you know how i love dystopian aus but this one takes the metaphorical cake bcos holy shit. the government taking their powers for their own benefit, the leapers forming in resistance but crumbling when wu fan is taken away ;_; i just love how each of the leapers flies, how you (punched me in the chest when) describing (...described) what jongdae has to do, how kyungsoo is grounded when jongin is constantly trying to escape.
HOW JONGIN AND KYUNGSOO MET AAAAAAAAAAA I CANT

Powers are an external reflection of one’s personality. There are groups of people who believe that the emergence of power had arose as a physical extension of a person’s character traits, their aspirations and the things that they truly craved for with their soul.
:( screams and thrashes, this is just everything incredible about this world tbqh??

There’s something different about the split ( ... )

dreamingofonew July 16 2012, 07:53:04 UTC

As always, it's beautiful. I was preparing for a really sobering ending about the acceptance of life even when it's shitty and bam, Jongin finds freedom. The ending was so perfect and just so so right ;~; this is me trying to be coherent and actually helpful after reading something this amazing. Like I said, this is insanely beautiful and you're an amazing writer. Wow.

feixing July 17 2012, 13:33:42 UTC

ngl that was one of the possible ends, but i had three possible ends and i asked a few people about them and they all told me not to be cliche. but honestly, this ending wouldn't have been possible without my amazing beta ♥
;~; i am glad you thought it was beautiful and amazing (!!!) you flatter.

tysm for reading ♥

dreamingofonew July 18 2012, 04:42:47 UTC

No problem :) And I'm happy you have an amazing beta because yet again, you wrote an amazing story. I look forward to reading anything else you write at this point XD

paradisist July 16 2012, 08:35:30 UTC

This. This is perfection. Your writing is so beautiful and perfect and I'm getting goosebumps all over. And I'm glad that your old style kind of peeked out a little here, as in the style you used in Wasted Daylight and Up, up and away, which were (still are) my FAVOURITE fics. I really really like the way you write because it floods me with feels and emotions and I'm like, bowled over (that's why i'm rambling, i can't think straight right now ( ... )

feixing July 17 2012, 13:40:02 UTC

;~~~; hello ♥ i am glad you liked it, and it is far from perfection, sobs, but thank you ♥
ah, i do notice a deviance from the way i wrote from the start vis a vis now, but i guess it is a sort of experiment sobs. but i do enjoy writing pieces like these the most, and i usually feel a little mentally exhausted but idk.

and omg you are too nice ;~;

sobs you are from singapore too? i love finding singaporean fans! and awh that is so cute ;~; i am seldom at ion tho aha so you probably won't find me, and this isn't creepy at all, don't worry. and uhm, if you want to be friends, i would love to! just shoot me a pm or something or you can always follow me on twitter. i am not there as much as i used to be, but i am always around ~ ♥

and omg second fic ;~~~; cries. tysm you are so lovely. ♥