One Direction fic | Outlast | OT5 | ~20,000 words | NC-17 | [2/2]

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Comments

[oanja]

This was the best! I just kept giggling to myself while reading this, even though it was super hot as well. That is a great mix when it comes to a story. Also Zayn is the best and for that reason this fic was very good for me and also I loved how Louis ended up taking himself out of the competition.

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Zayn IS the best, I agree wholeheartedly!! I'm really glad that you thought it worked, thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[x_smartie]

Yo hey this was gr9 :D

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Thanks!!!

[babygotbass]

SO GOOD! You mix funny dialog and feelings so well!

Day two - Paul throwing Louis in a closet!! And Zayn getting Liam ouuuuuuut. Then Louis losing kind of anti-climatically (hehe, climatically) when Harry wanted to lose so bad. Gaaaaah, then everyone getting Zayn off. SO SO GOOD.

[disarm_d]

Oh, yay! Thank you so much!! I'm really glad that you liked it! Thank you ever so much for taking the time to comment, :DDDD

[desfinado]

THIS WAS SPECTACULAR. Especially the way Zayn really just wanted all of them, all at once. And especially this:

Harry claps once, excitedly. Harry has been trying to get a blowjob from Liam for basically the entire time that Liam has had that mouth on that face.

YES.

[disarm_d]

Thank you, darling!!!! I am so glad you liked it. :D