30_kisses; Ten Seconds Until Eternity; Dream Pair; PG-13; Drama, Angst; Themes 09 and 10

[onew]

Title: Ten Seconds Until Eternity
Author: Hanabi Reeza [aoireeza]
Rating: PG-13 [for angst]
Genre: Drama, Angst
Pairing: Fuji Syusuke x Kikumaru Eiji [Dream Pair]
Theme Number: 09: dash, 10: #10 [for 30_kisses]
Word Count: 494 words
Diclaimers: TeniPuri isn't mine. It belongs to Konomi-sensei.
Summary: There are things that even Fuji Syusuke, the tensai that he is

Comments

[pinksnow1986]

short and powerful is what i would say!! ^____^, beautiful language.very lovely job!!

just tell me if I got it right - In the end Oishi makes a call to Eiji? (or is it Fuji making a call to Oishi? ) and Fuji tells him not to come; and the onewho is crying, its Oishi right? *just a lil confused*

[onew]

i am so sorry for the confusion. fuji made the call to oishi and oishi wanted to come over so that he could apologize to eiji. fuji told oishi that he shouldn't because eiji's still resting. and the one who cried was fuji. :D

again, i'm sorry for the confusion...

** i posted the same reply for you three because you asked me the same question... ^^;

[pinksnow1986]

i thought so!! the word 'concrete' confused me, i thought the person crying was outdoors for a sec; not indoors while Fuji and Eiji are at Eiji's house, my misunderstanding, really!!

[animegoil]

Yeah, I was a little confused about the stuff like in the comment above, but other than that... sad. Interesting scenario too, and gah, i just love the dream pair... T.T So sad...

[onew]

i am so sorry for the confusion. fuji made the call to oishi and oishi wanted to come over so that he could apologize to eiji. fuji told oishi that he shouldn't because eiji's still resting. and the one who cried was fuji. :D

again, i'm sorry for the confusion...

** i posted the same reply for you three because you asked me the same question... ^^;

[sugarcakey]

Thanks for uploading, I really enjoyed reading this ^_^
Although it's quite short, it's really touching *so sad ;_;*! The atmosphere you just created with your expressions and style of writing is very stirring..
But I have to agree, the end confused me a bit, too ^^;;;;
*sigh* I love Dream Pair ^_^

[onew]

i am so sorry for the confusion. fuji made the call to oishi and oishi wanted to come over so that he could apologize to eiji. fuji told oishi that he shouldn't because eiji's still resting. and the one who cried was fuji. :D

again, i'm sorry for the confusion...

** i posted the same reply for you three because you asked me the same question... ^^;

[sugarcakey]

Thansk for your explanation ^^ Now I understand XDD My interpretation of the things, which take place in the end, was a bit different, but now it makes more sense ^____^ Geez, I like that story^^ Hope to see more of your written stuff XD