This was sweet! It was a nice blend of humor and romance. I'm related to the McFluffys so no worries there.
The serious element was done well in that it wasn't too much or too little. Plus anyone who uses parallel structure and semantics well gets love. The banana joke was classic! I read that part twice, but then again I need help, soooooo I'm not sure if that really tells you anything.
Hee! Thanks :D I know I should be more flexible but when I see Ten and Martha together all I could think of is fluff, fluff and more fluff. And maybe some angst which eventually leads to fluff :p
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And I love your icon! I really must get around to watching that ep :p
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The serious element was done well in that it wasn't too much or too little. Plus anyone who uses parallel structure and semantics well gets love. The banana joke was classic! I read that part twice, but then again I need help, soooooo I'm not sure if that really tells you anything.
Thank you:o)
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Thank you! Lol yeah, McFluffys are everywhere :p
The banana joke was classic! I read that part twice, but then again I need help, soooooo I'm not sure if that really tells you anything.
You're not alone there, I mean, I wrote it, so what does that say about me ;) Banana jokes will never get old!
Thank you:o)
Well you're absolutely welcome, thank you for commenting!
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As it is, it's sweet and fluffy and very much what the Doctor ordered...
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