An Extra Shot of Chocolate Syrup (1/1)

[dipenates]

Title: An Extra Shot of Chocolate Syrup
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Ted/Victoria, ensemble 
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Length: ~3500
Icon: xmaidelx
Warning: None. 
Notes: Written for Bookglue (uptheapples ) for Yuletide.

Comments

[typhon_9]

VICTORIA! I'm always still hoping she's the mother. She and Ted were so perfect together. and this story was so maahvelous!

[dipenates]

Thanks very much.

[idioticonion]

Yes!!! I love Victoria and I love this story. It's perfect, and I love your voices of the characters in all the ensemble scenes. Brilliant work!

[dipenates]

Thanks very much! What a great comment.

[magpieinthesky]

Yay! I always loved Victoria, and this was beautifully written. Especially:

Marshall shook his head. “I’m saying that our capacity to love is bigger than the little stories that we tell to describe how it happens.”

Just perfect. I love how you captured the group's voices, and how you brought Victoria back. Great job!

[dipenates]

Thanks so much for an awesome comment.

[snogged]

This was brilliant!

I loved your Victoria characterization and the interactions between characters and the way Marshall is just plain awesome at explaining how love really works.

Will be saving to my mems.

[dipenates]

Thanks so much!

[smthwallflower]

I just read this, but it's awesome. I especially love,

>> “You’re my best friend, but if you hadn’t gone to that school, I’d have another best friend.” <<

Because it's totally true and a lot of people don't get it. And you know, the two lines that followed it ;)

And Victoria's FML. And your references :D

Wonderful!! Even if this is a tardy comment :P

[dipenates]

Thank you so much! (And sorry for the tardy response.)