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"With Each Passing Day, 2" // Dimgwrthien714

Sep 19, 2006 20:25

Title: With Each Passing Day, Part 2
Author: Christina
Fandom: CSI: NY
Pairing: Mac/Claire
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1200
Summary: Clips from Mac's life from the time he moved to New York and on. Mac and Claire move in and start work.

Chicago seemed dwarfed compared to New York now. Claire stood outside of the busy Manhattan apartment, looking at the ( Read more... )

csi: ny, mac/claire, fanfic, mac/stella

Comments 7

miss_andromache September 20 2006, 03:40:44 UTC

Awwwww. This is very cute. (Makes me sad, but in the good way)

dimgwrthien714 September 20 2006, 03:41:45 UTC

See? I'm the Queen of Kleenex even when I don't try to be. =P

Thanks! =D I just love writing my Claire in there. *hugs her*

miss_andromache September 20 2006, 03:44:55 UTC

I wish we'd been able to actually see Claire.

dimgwrthien714 September 20 2006, 03:46:08 UTC

*nodnod* One of these days, they need just the tiniest little flashback at least. I would kill off Lindsay for that.

(Granted, I demand to write that scene so that my Claire will be canon!Claire.)

poloparadise September 20 2006, 18:02:35 UTC

Hmm I definately like this. I'm not really sure, but it seems like in a few parts, their struggling with being in this new city, to the point where they feel uncomfortable around each other. I don't know why, but I guess I see them as more the type of people that comfort each other, when it seems like they are pulling away more and more in this story. THe last one they were so in tuned to each others needs, not it seems like they aren't.

Oh well, just something I noticed. Not sure if you intended it to be this way.

Pretty writing though, great job. as usual! ♥

dimgwrthien714 September 20 2006, 22:21:08 UTC

THANK YOU!

I'm out of those crazy people who feels kinda offended when people don't realize what I'm trying to do with the characters, and I think you got it spot-on.

My Mac and Claire are more like childhood friends than a couple, really. I've always written them as being cutesy, comforting friends over actual lovers, and that never works out for a long time. Then they realize that the world is a whole lot bigger than Chicago (which isn't quite as big as they thought), and they're just so... well, 'shocked' and 'uprooted' are the best words I can think of, but not quite, that they don't even understand if they should react to each other the exact same.

And Stella ain't helping matters.

ICON LOVE!

buffyangellvr23 November 19 2006, 04:58:22 UTC

Nice work :)