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To An Angel Falls from Lunar Geography ♥

Mar 06, 2008 08:49

Title: Fine Dining
Author: lunargeography
Recipient: anangelfalls
Series: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles
Characters/Pairing: Fai/Kurogane
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes/Warnings [if any]: Beware of TWT (probably set between the Ashura/Yasha world and Acid Tokyo) & my sense of humor. Thanks to badmovie for the beta and word chopping assistance.

( The maitre d' knew they were trouble the moment he saw them. )

round two, author: lunargeography, series: tsubasa reservoir chronicles

Comments 10

nightingale_r3 March 6 2008, 17:04:14 UTC

that was so cute!

lunargeography March 9 2008, 17:49:01 UTC

Thanks! I haven't written too much TRC, so I was a little nervous.

ldydragon7 March 6 2008, 17:41:09 UTC

Oh my! This was perfect and hystrical and perfectly hysterical. Poor poor tramatized Syaoran (why is it that Syaoran is so much fun to tramatize?)

"This establishment is black-tie only!"
The tall one grunted. "I'm wearing black. Give me your tie, and no one gets hurt." I love Kurogane, I really do.

"Well, you wouldn't want them to think you - and your posterior -- were unattractive, would you?" And I love Fai, too.

"I am not with them for sex!"
The entire room was staring at their table.
"I think we'll have the Riesling," said the blond. And this was just damn funny.

I really really enjoyed this, wonderful job! Absulotely funny (and sweet) without being over the top silly.

lunargeography March 9 2008, 17:53:22 UTC

Syaoran (both of them) are far too all-around comptent and poised for a teenaged boy. Hence the need to traumatize fluster him. Plus, he and Sakura are at their most adorable when flustered.

Thanks for letting me know which lines worked best for you (I always crave knowing what got a reaction!), and for taking the time to write a response.

anangelfalls March 6 2008, 20:25:22 UTC

Kawaii!!! Arigatou gozaimasu, Lunar Geography-san!! This was incredibly hilarious and made my day. Again, thank you!!

lunargeography March 9 2008, 17:54:36 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it... I wasn't quite sure what to do with your prompt, and hoped humorous fluff was ok.

youkohiei_fan March 6 2008, 22:04:13 UTC

XD The last line was the best. Good job! ^_^

lunargeography March 9 2008, 17:55:01 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked!

(and that's a really funny icon)

imladra March 26 2008, 04:01:15 UTC

I loved this! I loved Kurogane. Poor, long-suffering Kurogane. So self-sacrificing, kissing Fay. 'Loving feelings' indeed. Priceless!