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[diluted_tragedy]

Do you see me
standing here infront of you
or is your rage blinding you to my patience
losing everything
starting with my self respect
let go of all that haunts you
and come away with me

Do you feel me
holding you back from the edge
or did you think it was your own grace that saves you
I'm losing everything
even my sense of right and wrong
leave everyone that hurt you
and run away with me

Can't you hear me
whispering, screaming, sighing out my love for you
or does her name cloud your thoughts that much
we've lost everything
especially our dreams
turn away from everything you know
and forget about me

blah blah blah....needs work