Big Brother Woes [James S. Potter/Scorpius Malfoy]

Apr 12, 2015 19:16

Title: Big Brother Woes
Author/Artist: digthewriter
Word Count: 5710
Pairing: James Sirius Potter/Scorpius Malfoy [Background: Harry/Draco; Albus/OFC]
Rating: R
Content/Warning(s): Original Character(s). Semi-Epilogue Compliant. Happy Ending. [Spoiler Warnings Here]Internalized Homophobia. Mention of non-consensual sexual activity between James and OMC. Hurt/Comfort. Mature Themes.
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pairing: james sirius/scorpius, community: dove_drabbles, challenge: jmdc, rating: r

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divertazsc April 13 2015, 00:03:16 UTC
I really like the dynamic you built here. Al would be the mischievous one. Scorp seems to have the maturity and James is oblivious as his father.

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digthewriter April 13 2015, 00:37:38 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! Yeah, I really wanted to give them different personalities all balled up into one big family.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

xx

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smirkingcat April 13 2015, 06:30:04 UTC
at first i wasn't to sure because not so much into next gen- but then again i am to noisy to not read it
and well you wrote it so good, and i so couldn't stop reading it
and i adore al and him being mischievous - i liked that he made harry ask draco out too XD
also its really awesome how you made james miss, that his brother and scorp are grown ups now (like with the use of magic or when he tried to baby al its so cute)
and the dramatics between james and scorp soo awesome!
with a happy end (and i for one totally see them in the future with their own restaurant XD)
thank you for having letting me know
and awesome fic!
i liked it!

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digthewriter April 13 2015, 14:45:50 UTC
i for one totally see them in the future with their own restaurant XD

Thanks so much for reading! :D

I am glad you liked it.

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digthewriter April 13 2015, 14:45:04 UTC
Thanks for reading and thanks for going over all the stories and commenting! :D

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capitu April 13 2015, 12:04:57 UTC
I loved the way James was so protective of Al, I found it so sweet and even funny, and then I realised what had happened to him, so sad. No wonder he hated himself a bit, he had all those reservations about the other guys hanging around Al. Why he didn't see it was about him.

I loved Scorpius told him, I loved he told Scorpius what had happened. I think they could be great together. They are, Spcorpius would never hurt James, and I think James just needs to realise that, people out there, they are worth trusting, if he dares. Lovely. <3

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digthewriter April 13 2015, 14:41:50 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it :) x

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enchanted_jae April 14 2015, 02:08:38 UTC
How delightful! Thank you for such a wonderful story. I loved how awkward James was, as compared to how self-assured Albus was. What a nice contrast!

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digthewriter April 14 2015, 02:41:04 UTC
Thank you so much. I am happy you took the time to read it! :)

xx

Glad you liked it, too.

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