First Soubi/Kio I've read (first Loveless fic, as a matter of fact), and I loved this one. Kio didn't get enough love in the anime, and I've yet to read the manga, so this fic was nice. And did I mention hot? I loved that the whole thing was teasing and not rushed at all. ^^ Would love to read more stories of this type from you.
And just a question, but if you're aware of the typo, why not edit it out? o_O;
Oh, I am so glad you liked my Kio/Soubi story! Seeing how it was your first one, so that means a lot to me that you like it. ^^ I was very iffy about it from the start, so this is a very encouraging comment to read.
Would love to read more stories of this type from you. -blush- Thank you so much. We shall see. ^^
XD And the typo? I did fix it. Hehe. A bit too late though. -_-;
beautiful job! i'm so glad you shared. i think my favorite part was at the end, when Soubi had Kio against the door. the way he gives Kio what he wants, but just a taste. Just wonderful!
-smiles- Thank you so much for reading and commenting, kimper; I am so glad you liked it.
i think my favorite part was at the end, when Soubi had Kio against the door. the way he gives Kio what he wants, but just a taste. Just wonderful! -smiles- I think that was my favorite part too. I'm glad you think it came out well. ^^
I don't want you to think that I'm trying to kiss up, because that will never be the case... and I won't give you false praise.
But I truly am pleased with this story. It's cute and so subtle in its words that the smut is not mind-numbing and makes me to bang my head against a keyboard. It's happened before... which is way I rarely read it. But I knew... I knew I would definitely find enjoyment in this and I did. ^_^
And I am glad you stepped out and posted this, but don't let that one mistake stop you from doing more of these... if your muse tugs at you for it. ;) Getting a beta is not a bad idea, because they definitely see the mistakes that you normally wouldn't... even after 10 read-throughs. I can help, if you'd like.
Good luck in the future, lovie. Don't let that mistake discourage you so much. ;)
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I know it's not a very coherent comment but that's all your fault for writing Soubi/Kio pairing like that. XD
I liked it a lot. ^.^ Ritsuka and Soubi are cute and canon but Soubi and Kio look so good together X3
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"Guuuh" is a perfect response. Heh. Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting. ^^
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And just a question, but if you're aware of the typo, why not edit it out? o_O;
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Would love to read more stories of this type from you.
-blush- Thank you so much. We shall see. ^^
XD And the typo? I did fix it. Hehe. A bit too late though. -_-;
p.s. I adore your icon. O_o
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i think my favorite part was at the end, when Soubi had Kio against the door. the way he gives Kio what he wants, but just a taste. Just wonderful!
-smiles- I think that was my favorite part too. I'm glad you think it came out well. ^^
Thank you!
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But I truly am pleased with this story. It's cute and so subtle in its words that the smut is not mind-numbing and makes me to bang my head against a keyboard. It's happened before... which is way I rarely read it. But I knew... I knew I would definitely find enjoyment in this and I did. ^_^
And I am glad you stepped out and posted this, but don't let that one mistake stop you from doing more of these... if your muse tugs at you for it. ;) Getting a beta is not a bad idea, because they definitely see the mistakes that you normally wouldn't... even after 10 read-throughs. I can help, if you'd like.
Good luck in the future, lovie. Don't let that mistake discourage you so much. ;)
I love you! *hugs you tight*
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