Snatch Part One

[didntyoupotter]

Title: Snatch

Pairing: Harry/Draco

Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: They're not mine. Sadly. Notes: Many thanks to Kate for the beta job.
Summary: Harry is comatose, Hermione and Ron aren’t much help, and Draco isn’t sure about anything anymore.

Comments

[lildove42]

I'm trying to ease my way back into HP fandom after abandoning it for QAF fandom for a while. What a way to do it. I love how little things are left out. Like, there's this esatblished relationship between Draco and Harry after the kiss but you don't say it. It's very nice. Also some lines that I absolutely adored:

“Why are you doing this?” they asked him.
“Because I’m less afraid of you,” he replied in the same blank, level voice.

There are a lot more but I'm at work and don't want to get in trouble! But I am looking forward to the next part!

[une_moineau]

Oh, this is great! I haven't read anything HP for a long time, and this is one of the best I've read so far. Not too longwinded, adn thank gods- I get a headache most of the time. A lot of fanfics tend to try to copy JKR's length, I guess...

I am looking forward to reading your works! Though I'm ferently hoping that Harry's not dead, either.. Hopefully, Hermione and Ron will be angry and protective, but not too hateful. I shudder to think that they suddely turn evil and try to kill Draco. o.o

I really loved this, and again, I'm looking forward to more~! ^^

[didntyoupotter]

Hehe, well they didn’t try to kill him…

Poor Hermione and Ron, I’m afraid I didn’t make them very nice in this fic. They just couldn’t see why Harry would want anything to do with Draco and they were very bitter about it.

[jengou]

Whoa, whoa. This is brilliant. I love how such raw honest was mixed so well with romance. It swept me away and over ^_^

[jengou]

Just saw there was part 2 and 3. Holy moly *RUNS*

[didntyoupotter]

Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the rest of it as much! ♥

[zahavah]

mmm. moving on... very good, although it could use a beta.

[lola_thursday]

Just found this fic and your journal. I just love your writing style--focused and effective, yet it feels effortless. It's almost sparse, but only in the good way, and I can see everything play out so clearly. And I love this take on Draco--he feels so real.

He was looking back at Draco and there was nothing in his eyes other than that mild sort of curiosity and a weariness that seemed somehow permanent. No spark of anger or disgust. No sign at all of the animosity that had been there for nearly as long as Draco had known him. And suddenly Draco realized it just wasn’t there anymore. Somewhere along the way Harry had discarded it and now it was just… gone.

Draco would never have expected to miss it.

But he did.

Like that, that's just perfect.

I'm sort of new to HP fandom--at least to the writing and participating side :) Hope you don't mind that I friended you.