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[FIC] Father's Gun (54/?)

Mar 02, 2015 20:37

Title: Father's Gun ( Read more... )

Comments 10

sammycolt24 March 3 2015, 03:23:11 UTC

Ooo! A fire! How ironic. But seriously this was a wonderful chapter. Dean was finally able to express his feelings and I loved every enraging moment of it. I can sit back and relax now. But we must fix wheezing Sam. Poor baby. Can't wait for the next chapter.

diana_lucifera March 6 2015, 00:10:48 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed! That blow-out between Dean and John was a long damn time coming. But yes, wheezing Sam is not good. Must deal with that soon.

Thanks for reading!

dljensengirl88 March 3 2015, 03:34:36 UTC

Wow. I long ago suspended my version of John in order to read this story, then after Jim doped Dean I saw I had to suspend that version too. But I never ever saw either of them being this cold-hearted and murderous, though it seems like neither would think that's what they're doing. And to solve this problem? YOU burn the church down! lol! Works for me because now Dean - outside of a church - is renewing his commitment to Sam and against their dad, and if that's what it takes to get them on the same page, then so be it. I just hope Sam keeps him in the loop now too.

diana_lucifera March 6 2015, 00:25:04 UTC

But I never ever saw either of them being this cold-hearted and murderous, though it seems like neither would think that's what they're doing.

Very, very true. We're definitely gonna touch on that some more in the next chapter.

And yes, haha, we burned the church down. Sometimes you just need to start a small inferno to grease the plot along. ;)

Thanks for reading!

mdlaw March 3 2015, 03:42:50 UTC

Oh Dean! m. /0\

diana_lucifera March 6 2015, 00:25:22 UTC

I know!! Thanks for reading. :)

cappy712 March 6 2015, 06:46:41 UTC

Oh man the build and then to see that the church was burning. Then to find out that Jim and John were outside and letting Sam stay inside and burn, oh man......

Looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

diana_lucifera March 8 2015, 20:15:35 UTC

Thanks for reading! I just put up the newest chapter. :)

sylvia37 March 7 2015, 17:27:27 UTC

Oh wow, that was awesome. I really hate that Jim betrayed them because I wanted them to have another ally. So glad to see Dean finally tell John off, I kind of hope that Sam gets to tell him too. How painful to know that people you should be able to trust were willing for you to burn to death. ugh......

diana_lucifera March 8 2015, 20:22:26 UTC

Glad you liked! Honestly, Jim's betrayal hurt us, too. It did make the most sense for his character, though, so we went with it! It's good that you guys enjoyed Dean telling off John, but you're right, we didn't get to hear from Sam on this. Maybe in an upcoming chapter? We'll see.

Thanks for reading! I just put up the next chapter, as well. :)