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...so today, while looking for this bunnyfic 2000 sidestory bit that isweartogod exists somewhere, i discovered that there are about eighty separate documents scattered about my gdocs/wips HD folders, wtfff! a whole stack of which i don't even remember conceiving of, much less writing any for~ ahaha. 8D have this one for starters. because it's a
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So. Goddamn. Cute. :D There were too many good parts for me to quote them here. But a worried Tottsu and a batshit crazy Tsuka-chan, and Kitayama sharing looks with people and Hasshi and just... D': I love them.
I really can't figure out where you get all your ideas from. I like the text here, it's somehow very... ah, I don't have a word for it; there are these funny and tricky word choices that, when you read them, make you feel that "Ah, that's the _perfect way to say this." Am I making any sense here? You use this style a lot. They're all sort of like inside jokes, but then again not, and I think it's them that create the sneaky humorous flavor in your stories. I like them. :)Sorry for not being able to explain this any more clearly. :'D Take the whole first three-lined paragraph as your example. I liked it a lot. (Plus, hey, the bolded sub-titles. ♥ They fit the story and were pretty and just... heart-breaking? :'D)
I like your Tsukada. In all truth, he's the ebisu I don't know much about. Yet. This made him feel more open. Easier to get to know to. I don't know. xD
I've been chuckling here all happily for five minutes already, and I'm not counting in the time I spend on the fic~!
I don't know what to say anymore. I liked the lightness of the atmosphere, the idea and your characters and thank you for writing about Tsukada too. Do so more often. :D
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the boys are so much fun; they make their own ideas, i swear. xD but thank you for such a thoughtful comment again. m(__)m word choice is pretty important to me, i think. *will often go back and just change one word here or there* xD; aha~ so i'm very glad you think it's coming across well. :D :D
you should definitely look into tsuka-chan when you can. xD the boy is hilarious, as are his buns of steel. ♥ (my favourite is still the musical chairs episode where he bumped everyone out of the way with near-concussive force. 8D) i'll definitely try to write him more also. xD thanks again!
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