Eye of the beholder -- Chapter 5

Feb 15, 2005 16:06

Here is the next chapter of Eye of the beholder

Chapter 05 - Payback )

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schehrezade_1 February 15 2005, 07:59:16 UTC
Sigh fricking Angel...

Can we stake him too?? Lurking around watching and being all pouty - I swear Angel is an arse. Is Dru sure she wants to go with him???

How could he be so oblivious about Jenny?? And may I add Giles dusting Darla and then his speech to Angel - OUTSTANDING!

Also I really like your idea that Darla can get in even though been dusted the invite still stands - really clever plotting!!!

Unable to listen to his delusional prattling any longer, she rapidly nears the point where she would prefer being killed, if only to be spared this torture. this had me snorting out loud ::grin::

Is it me or is Angel truely shallow - oh Darla's dust better go chat up Dru cos don't wanna be lonely *rolls eyes*

recently decreased Angel, typo here deceased rather than decreased -hope it's okay pointing this out?

Fantastic chapter Dia really enjoyed it

Hon as alway a nummy treat!

XXXXX

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diabola79 February 15 2005, 08:14:19 UTC
Glad you liked it!

Of course it's okay to point that out! Changed it now - thanks :-)

And yes, Angel is shallow, you know me, don't have the best opinion of Cpt. Forehead *smirk*.

As for the Jenny part, it always felt to me as if - no matter that he wore his guilt like a halo - Angel never really identified himself with Angelus. And it's not like the Scoobies' attitude helped with that. So it would be logical for him to expect Giles to blame Angelus not Angel for Jenny's death.

Hmmm, if Dru goes with him you'll find out soon. All I can say is that the girl knows what she is doing ;-)

Giles and his Darla-dusting is what gave the chap it's name btw. Thought Giles was still owed some...

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schehrezade_1 February 15 2005, 09:29:36 UTC
Phew was worried you might smack me for mentioning it!

Angel is shallow LOL to right *snigger*

Sing out sista he never really felt guilty - blamed it on Angelus and made sure that the two identities were kept seperate. Whereas he is both Angel and Angelus we all have good and evil in us. The brooding I think was more a manfestation of his ennui rather than anything else...am I making sense of should I get more sleep....

Oh oh oh does that mean Dru will stay?? Damn I am going to have to wait aren't I???

Giles is owed a lot - he hasn't even gotten even for the torture in the mansion!!

Great chapter darling

XXX

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diabola79 February 15 2005, 09:44:50 UTC
You are making sense (or you did once I checked what ennui means *blushes*)!
Not like he had anything else going for him *snigger*

Uhmmm, I'd tell you since I love getting spoiled myself, but I'm afraid there are people out there who'll hurt poor me if I do that. So yes, you'll have to wait. I'll try to be fast, though :-)

So Tempus huh? That's so cool! One of those fics I've re-read to often to count... And I'll be sure to check for your enty in WD later on :-)

Btw, yay to the shirts! Definitely want one. Oh, you'll soooo love .. ups, bad!Dia, no telling. Hehe, aren't I evil today *snigger*

p.s.: I'll let you know if I find the fic with Spike doing the trails all clever like. Can't remember where I read it right now.

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schehrezade_1 February 16 2005, 04:43:35 UTC
Damn no spoiling for me - off to pout ::grin:: Don't want you hurt so I'll be good and not use the Puss in Boots eyes on yah!

Tempus - hopefully later tonight - am at work and I need to dig it out and clean it up! Will post on LJ

Hee to the tshirt and HEY no teasing the Schez with nearly spilling the beans!!!

Ohh lemme know if you find that ficcy

Huggles
XXX

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