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dhamphir

Dana's Malakim Pt 16/32

May 10, 2010 00:07

Title: Dana’s Malakim

Author: dhamphir

Fandom: X-Files

Pairing: Scully/OFC (Logan)

Rating: NC17

Summary: Scully must identify Mulder’s body after his suicide. Dying of cancer, she now faces an uncertain future, a crisis of faith... and a new partner. Little does she know the extraordinary and incredible things she’s seen while with the X-Files are ( Read more... )

fic, dana's malakim, character: dana scully, fandom: x-files, pairing: scully/ofc, au, pairing: scully/logan, character: nicole logan, rating: nc17, character: ofc

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dhamphir May 10 2010, 05:58:11 UTC

It's getting even better, and I didn't think that was at all possible. thank you Dhamphir!
I'm certainly glad you think so! And thanks for all your support and encouragement. :)

wkgreen May 10 2010, 05:43:13 UTC

Hmm.. risky telling Maggie, but I understand why Nicole did.

I like how at first she was referred to as Logan, but now she is Nicole most of time.

Hmmm.. FBI is going to go crazy and Skinner better guess that Nicole took Dana, at least he better if he is any good at his job. Too big a coincidence of timing with Nicole going one a mysterious job and Dana going missing right after.

Waiting for more! :)

dhamphir May 10 2010, 06:02:36 UTC

Hmm.. risky telling Maggie, but I understand why Nicole did.
Yeah, there is a little bit of a risk. But after having gotten to know Maggie, Nicole couldn't put her through another disappearance of her daughter. I think Maggie's a lot stronger than people expect.

I like how at first she was referred to as Logan, but now she is Nicole most of time.
So do I. As we, and Dana, have gotten to know her better she's become more than just 'Agent Logan.'

Hmmm.. FBI is going to go crazy and Skinner better guess that Nicole took Dana, at least he better if he is any good at his job. Too big a coincidence of timing with Nicole going one a mysterious job and Dana going missing right after.
Yes, it is definitely a big red flag. However, I'm sure it's something Nicole has thought about as well. We'll just have to wait and see how things play out. ;-)

celievamp May 10 2010, 17:47:24 UTC

This is getting to be a superb bit of storytelling. Your skills and confidence have come a hell of a long way in the last eighteen months. Well done!

dhamphir May 10 2010, 18:18:26 UTC

This is getting to be a superb bit of storytelling.
I'm so glad you think so. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Your skills and confidence have come a hell of a long way in the last eighteen months. Well done!
I can't tell you how much it means to me for you to say that! Especially since, as my first beta, you saw some pretty rough stuff when I started out. Your patience and help during that initial effort helped me a lot. :)

kendiefox May 10 2010, 20:00:16 UTC

Oh, my heart! This series just doesn't stop being amazing.

I'm hopeful that Dana's recovery leads to a few more revelations between the partners.

Thank you so much for this.

dhamphir May 11 2010, 00:57:34 UTC

Oh, my heart! This series just doesn't stop being amazing.
I'm glad you're still enjoying the story and that you're not disappointed. :)

I'm hopeful that Dana's recovery leads to a few more revelations between the partners.
I'm sure there will be a few things brought to light as Dana's health improves.

Thank you so much for this.
You're very welcome. I've enjoyed writing this and it makes me feel good to know that others find a little pleasure from it as well. So, thank you for your support and comments! :D

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dhamphir May 11 2010, 04:13:19 UTC

Nicole sure does have some interesting friends.
Well, this is an X-Files fic. *lol*

I like that we get to see more into her life. I also like the way she is opening up to us, if not to Dana yet.
We'll get to see more into her life as the story continues. And don't worry, Dana will eventually be privy to the inner workings of Nicole before we're done. ;-)