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To Be At Sea
» Ahoy mate! What be your pleasure? Aye? Come to ride aboard The Black Order? Avast, be warned! The road to California by sea is dangerous, and yer crew be twice more! Aye then, come aboard and see the adventures of the deep, filled with ghosts, goings overboard, and the drunkest Captain you'd ever

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[koskaet]

..I feel like I'm bit late to the party, but I'll comment nevertheless. (feeling pretty stupid right now for not realizing DGure fandom has BigBangs as well..) It took me several days to finish reading this, but now that I have, all I can say is WOW. That..must've taken so much time to write. And plan. With sailor slang as well. English being not my first language I was a bit lost at first, but I got used to it quickly. I'm glad I didn't stop reading by then.

Because this just made its way into my fav fics. ♥

I like it SO. MUCH. The characterization and dialogue made this fanfiction so much fun to read. 8D Even minor characters have nice feeling to them.♥ Oh Bak, fancy seeing you in fanfictions for change. (: To be honest I was bit worried that it would contain love triangle, because of pairings, so the fact that it stayed pretty much gen for the whole fic was really nice touch. Since I'm not Yullen shipper myself I was glad to see that the pairing wasn't forced on reader. Laven bits on otherhand...♥♥ SO ADORABLE. They sum up EXACTLY everything I like about them *__* ...So because of them I also went through several different emotions while reading. Which is really good thing. The goodbye they exchanged was...really heartbreaking. And everyone else leaving as well. Allen choosing to stay. You write well, at the end I was working myself into depression too along with Allen. Then suddenly. BAM. Out of nowhere: "OMG THEY DIDN'T STAY THERE AFTERALL FFFF THEY'RE BACK HI LAVIIII!!!11! 8DDD//" I LOVE THIS ENDING. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ;; Even if it left me wanting for moar, due to its "the adventures are just starting!" feeling, but I guess I will just have to do the same thing as with 'Kiss!Kiss!Love you,baby!' and use imagination to come up with continuity. |: (was that the word?)

Some things left me bit puzzled, like what exactly is this universe's 14th and where the heck did Cross pop out from. But I guess these are mysteries that make the story more mystical. I'm repeating myself. And writing this when I obviously should be in bed, since it's 2a.m here. gah. But but. Great work and sorry for rambling! :D Merry christmas/happy holidays~

[freakingcage7]

Thank you SOOO much for your kind review! (and as for YOU having English as a second language all I can say is WHOA DUDE, because you rock it). And thank you so much for reading the whole thing through! I truly appreciate your effort. :D

This work for me was worth all of the work I put into it, because I really did just enjoy writing it. And I'm THRILLED you loved the ending so much, because your reactions were everything I was hoping to get from you! (Lavi is my special friend, so, I'm also impartial to the Allen/Lavi pairing XD) And yeah, I did want to make it one of those stories you, as the reader, can lay awake at night and imagine how you would like the ending to turn out. Open endings are fun. ♥

And thank you for your constructive criticism as well! I tried to make the Noahs and Cross an intrigue in case I decided to write a sequel, but as the sequel hasn't (and sadly won't) be written, it does just turn out to be confusing and not so much mystical. :/

And lol, you don't ever need to apologize for rambling. Awesome and thoughtful readers like you make me feel really privileged. :D Happy holidays to you too! And thanks again for reading!!!!