♥ "Notes on Falling Out of Love" for embe11ished 3/3 ♥

[fienabler]

Title: Notes on Falling Out of Love 3/3
Rating: Not Naughty
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Warnings for language, but nothing else. Spoilers galore for Deathly Hallows and stuff about the characters that J.K. Rowling discusses in press conferences, etc. (that isn’t mentioned in the books).
Summary (if fic): It's hard to learn how to live without that

Comments

[lyndsiefenele]

Very nice! Draco was very in character, yet not static, and it unfolded perfectly. I really liked the structure, as well. Excellent!

[lyndsiefenele]

Aw, thank you! It means a lot that you think Draco was really in character, because his characterization was one of the elements I struggled with the most. So thanks! :)

[seegrim]

Oh. MY. GOODNESS! *flails a supreme-sized flail*

I'm not sure where to start!

First, probably, with the liver comments! Too funny!

The shards rained down inside her, cutting against the pain and resentment, showering upon her organs. One of them landed on her liver.

I don't know why the liver, but that's what made it even funnier.

Hermione was a sweetheart. That was a really touching scene--her comforting Ginny.

Draco bringing Ginny home when she was drunk? Aw. Sweetness.

Leaving Hogwarts and the rain and the mud puddles? That was great! Him bowing to his sense of propriety and having to follow the rules of engagement and toss her into a mud puddle? Hilarious.

And their friendship? Oh. I LOVED it. LOVED.

The trick or treating scene was a hoot.

Great. Now he was a Halloween costume too.I absolutely adored the playful banter and the drawing on the fogged window. I read through that part with an idiotic grin on my face

[nbaeker]

SECONDED!!!

*loves*

[seegrim]

Haha, thank you!

[seegrim]

Wow it's a very good thing no one can see me right now because I am blushing so badly right now. It means a lot that you liked the fic, especially since my friend and I were fangirling over your stories just the other day, so the admiration definitely goes in both direction. And everything in your comments made me go all fuzzy-feeling inside. So thank you!! ^-^

[anonymous]

lol .... I think Seegrem(sp? sorry if i got it wrong :)) summed it all up for me... i LOVED it. It really made my night.

Also this "It makes me wonder about my mental state, if I’m at my happiest when I’m sweaty and aching and sleep-deprived, zooming about on a broomstick. (I just realized that that could be taken entirely the wrong way. Stop laughing, you dirty minded girl.)" is my favorite part. it reminds me of my friends...

[anonymous]

oops... Seegrim... my bad. sorry

[anonymous]

Thanks! I didn't actually realize how...erm, differently that part could've be interpreted until I was editing the fic and then i just had to mention something about it. I'm glad it reminded you of you and your friends, because it definitely reminds me of me and mine. :)

Awesome

[anonymous]

Loved it! That just made my day. I'm still grinning like an idiot.

Loved all of it. Yea, Seegrim totally summed it up.

And I love how you used the the theme of light both at the beginning and at the end, only the light at the end was artificial but warm and the light at the beginning was, well yea, I'm rambling, you get it.

Sigh. *wanders of happily*

Re: Awesome

[anonymous]

Aw, rambling is okay, I do it all the time. But I'm happy that you liked my fic. I'm even happier that I can write something to make others grin like idiots! ^_^ Thanks!

[airmidm]

Wow! I loved this. Seegrim summed it up for me. :D I love the 'Voldemort skating in hell' comment as well. Well done!

[airmidm]

I'm glad you liked the fic. Thank you! ^_^