♥ "Control" for the dgficexchange

Dec 19, 2008 12:31


Title: Control
Author: dancingcinders
Rating: PG-13 (Teen)
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: All Books, just in case. Canon up to the Epilogue, as all good D/G fic usually is. =]
Author's Notes: Though it was a little hard going and had to go through at least four versions, it is finally here. =] A warm and humbled thanks to my lovely beta, Anna. Even though she ( Read more... )

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gidge_8 December 19 2008, 20:15:25 UTC
This was so cute! Loved Ron, as his overreaction was just perfect. I can totally imagine him ranting all the way down the street.

Ginny's perspective is really well done throughout, and I just loved this part:
"No ruffles, no lace. No ridiculous colors that supposedly ‘go well with my coloring.’”

“Black robes, then?”

“Finally, someone who understands fine fashion!”

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baroness_black December 20 2008, 01:49:37 UTC
Very cute, fun read and very well written. Loved this line:
'I sighed as I glanced at the clock, which was stuck between time to work and time to go home. If it didn’t turn soon, it was going to be time to dump the dumb old clock in the rubbish.' Hehehe, squee!

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adelagia December 20 2008, 06:42:49 UTC
Hee, this was such a fun read! I laughed at way too many one-liners to list them all, but suffice it to say I really enjoyed reading this.

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dragonsangel68 December 20 2008, 14:15:26 UTC
He was a very charming little toad *giggles*

Very cute! Love how he knew it was her all along :)

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paperhana December 21 2008, 20:06:55 UTC
You met the prompt perfectly! This was very cute. I love how he knew it was her all along! And yet he played along with not knowing. :)

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