♥ "Between Broken Lines" for mynuet ♥

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Title: Between Broken Lines
Author: eustacia_vye28
Rating: A very loving NC-17.
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: None, other than the rating.
Author's Notes: I incorporate DH except for the epilogue. It's not the shipping that killed it for me, it was the shoddy writing and that it was a poor way to end the series.
Summary: Sometimes the line between pretend and

Comments

[mynuet]

That was very cute and sweet, thank you. :) I like how Ginny got to know his personality so well, even the less attractive qualities, and fell in love with him anyway.

[mynuet]

I am SO happy you liked it!

[seegrim]

Hee!

There were some very cute parts, but my favorite is the way it ended with Draco feeling secure in Ginny's love for him and no longer inferior to Harry.

And Luna! She was fabulous. Her mention of Harry's virility made me giggle-snort!

Thanks!

[seegrim]

I think Luna was my favorite part of the piece. She's so matter of fact in her oddness. :)

Thakns so much for the comment. :)

[cyyt]

At first, I thought Draco was a little OOC in his manner of speech, but after a bit, his character came through.(: I could have squealed at the ending! So sweet! I liked that 'after thought' like feeling when 'A much smaller announcement on page five told of Harry's engagement to Luna. ' was written; made me laugh. Luna was very in character, especially in that second last scene. I also didn't find the way you inserted that Harry and Luna were dating weird; it seemed to fit in quite well with the fic.

'sincerity bleeding from his famous green eyes.' I like that line!(: There are many others too(:

[cyyt]

The afterthought Prophet line was my gift to our heroes. :)

I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[nbaeker]

Oh, this was a great story. All right amounts of romance, lust, and realism. :)

Thanks for a great read!

[nbaeker]

I'm glad you liked it!

[emo_globina]

It has been a very good morning reading! :)
I like the realistic atmosphere, the way you have described Draco's life after the war. Great work!

[emo_globina]

*loves on your icon*

Thanks so much!