♥ "Lost and Found" for kittyprincess74

Dec 10, 2008 15:16

Title: Lost and Found
Author: pipperstorms
Rating: PG-13
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: Character Death
Author's Notes: Oh, how I like to experiment with perspectives. I do hope that you enjoy your story, I had an entertaining time trying to write it, it changed at least four times, and I’m mostly pleased with the out come - thanks for playing I hope you like it ( Read more... )

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ryuugazaki December 11 2008, 00:08:16 UTC
This was such an unique story! I absolutely loved your play on perspectives...even if the ending wasn't filled with joy, you gave us intrinsic understanding into the characters and on why the fic had to end the way it did.

Her heartbeat mocked her, because it was still beating, and his no longer would.

This line really left me breathless ♥

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ryuugazaki December 11 2008, 18:48:37 UTC
The line that you liked was actually written a very long time ago for a drabble that never saw the light of day: I was happy to get to use it! I'm very pleased you liked the perspectives

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seegrim December 11 2008, 00:10:11 UTC
Wow. That was wonderful! It was just the right amount of sadness, and I really enjoyed the telling of the story from different perspectives.

I also thought you did a good job of writing a darker Harry, but while still keeping him believably in canon.

Thank you! :)

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seegrim December 11 2008, 18:47:12 UTC
I am very happy you thought he was still in canon! That's what I was going for :) I've always thought he could have been much darker than he became. And, as always, I'm happy you liked it :)

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dragonsangel68 December 11 2008, 00:54:34 UTC
So sad! I'm sitting here all teary, especially for Ginny who suffered Draco's loss twice. Thank you for such an emotive read :)

(BTW, I just want to punch one Harry Potter in the nose after what he did to them)

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dragonsangel68 December 11 2008, 18:45:46 UTC
Yes, I would like to punch him as well :X Thanks fro the review, I'm glad you found it emotional!

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silveredaccents December 11 2008, 01:10:34 UTC
OH my goodness! This was amazing. Breathtaking and tearjerking. Lovely.

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silveredaccents December 11 2008, 18:44:54 UTC
lol is it too off color to say yay for tears? Thanks for the review!

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erlthegrl December 11 2008, 01:32:28 UTC
This was so touching. I just want to punch Harry for being such a selfish git! It sucks that even though Draco and Ginny can't be together that Harry still won by having them apart. I think the way you played with the perspectives really made the story more touching. It was a great dark story.

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erlthegrl December 11 2008, 18:44:12 UTC
He did ruin it, and for that I wouldn't give him a happy ending either : ) I have fun with perspectives, and I'm glad you liked them ;)

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