Fic: Transition

[dfriendly]

Title: Transition

Show: Merlin

Characters/Pairings: Gwen/Arthur

Rating: R, to be safe

Word Count: 1746

Disclaimer: I obviously don’t own.

Warnings: fluff & some possible cliché-ness.

Summary: After months of wrestling with his feelings for Gwen, Arthur does something about it.

A/N: So 65% of this has been sitting on my computer for months,

Comments

[dfriendly]

Oh, thank you, dear :)

[9tiptoes]

I can't not imagine why you lack any confidence in this piece...I am swooning. SWOONING! It's wonderful. You always do such a wonderful job with these two characters.
And Hello, Mr. Darcy. That's a great comparison. I may have to go grab up my Pride & Predjudice to re-read w/ Gwen & Arthur as the leads. Yummy.

[dfriendly]

Well, it's not a perfect parallel, but they certainly have some similarities!

Glad I could make you swoon!

[scarlettpeony]

This was very nice. It's sort of like... the beginning of their secret affair or something with the "things that need to be discussed" and everything. I love the intensity. Another thing I really love is that Arthur stops things before they go too far. It is so easy to be hasty in a moment like that but he stops. It shows he had respect for her - and I love it!

[dfriendly]

It's sort of like... the beginning of their secret affair or something with the "things that need to be discussed" and everything.

Yup, that was pretty much its purpose if I'd decided to pursue the whole story arc/multi-parter of it. And of course he's gotta be all respectful and thoughtful, haha.

Thanks, Sophie.

PS: speaking of multi-chapter fics.... when might the next installment of TYAA be out? (hate to be a bother :D)

[scarlettpeony]

It's bad enough that Arthur is already every girl's fantasy without him being respectful and thoughtful at all times too. How could you ever leave him? :)

PS: speaking of multi-chapter fics.... when might the next installment of TYAA be out? (hate to be a bother :D)

Soon, I hope. The truth is I've been a bit down lately and none of my writing has been up to scratch. So I'm doing a full edit and will upload Parts 39 and 40 together, with the final chapter following soon. I'm sorry for the delay!

[irrel]

“We should stop,” Gwen panted after several minutes.

Arthur nodded quickly, replying between kisses. “We will. - For eating. - Sleeping.”

HAHAHA, that's perfect! :D This was so good!

[dfriendly]

:D Thanks!

[jazzrose343]

Seriously I loved this sooo much!

The intensity and the way Arthur blurts out how he feels. *squee*

How their actions begin tentativley and grow into something more!

Also Arthur realising that they need to stop, Letting his respect for Gwen come first.

Yiu have no worries with this story :D

[dfriendly]

Thanks for all the compliments!

the way Arthur blurts out how he feels
Yeah, Arthur's not the best at expressing himself, so we're lucky he could say it at all!