Ficlet: Let me bathe here in your smile (Pep/Bojan)

Apr 14, 2009 14:02

Title: Let me bathe here in your smile...

Summary: Pep used to wish Bojan wouldn’t smile so often.

Warnings: Slash. And a bit of angst, too.

Rating: PG-13. As innocent as Bojan himself. ::cough, cough::

Wordcount: 467

Disclaimers: I shouldn’t be allowed to watch football matches unsupervised by a team of psychiatrists. This is all in my ( Read more... )

fanfic, footie slash, bojan krkic, pep guardiola

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dfotw April 15 2009, 09:03:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked this ficlet...
You know, I'm always struck by how small and childish and downright *puppyish* (I couldn't find a better word to describe it) Bojan looks when he's around Pep, and yet when you see him on his own you realise he's not only not short, but actually very well-built (for an 18-year-old, and I feel a little guilty by saying this).
So, yes, I think some of what I was trying to convey actually got through... I'm thinking of a companion piece from Bo's POV, but I should actually work a little as well, so we'll see.
Thank you for your comment!

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sophiamoon April 14 2009, 13:37:01 UTC
I feel not only a lot better with this lovely fic, I feel downright spoiled.

Thank you so much. :-)

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dfotw April 15 2009, 08:59:37 UTC
Just as well you feel a little spoiled, after having spoiled so many of us so much with your lovely fics (requests and otherwise)...
Glad you liked it, and you're welcome!

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sophiamoon April 16 2009, 16:46:22 UTC
That's really very sweet of you. (makes me shy, though)

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dfotw April 17 2009, 09:06:18 UTC
Don't be shy! I'm harmless, really... (just a rabid fangirl, a notoriously harmless species)

(and this must have been the first time since I was three that anyone's called me 'sweet'... thanks!)

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notsostrange April 15 2009, 18:42:10 UTC
This is...God. So heart-breaking and touching and lovely.

and there are times when he considers it a fair trade-off, to feel guilty for the rest of his life but to never make Bojan feel unwanted again.

Oh Bojan. ;_;

Thanks for this wonderful little treat. <3

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dfotw April 16 2009, 08:03:25 UTC
Thank you for the wonderful comment!

I think this was a kind of Oh, Bojan, Oh, *Pep* situation, where you don't know very well for which of them to feel the most...

So, I'm glad you read it and liked it!

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dfotw May 23 2009, 08:35:49 UTC
Thank you, my dear... my friend, a die-hard Bojan fan, brought his abandonement to my attention and I... couldn't leave it alone, I guess. So I'm glad it served as an appetizer to your curiosity.

It's more than OK if you add me. I'm not the most sociable of persons (on LJ or RL), but if you come recommended from a friend, I can only open my arms in welcome!

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dfotw June 2 2009, 11:43:53 UTC
Thank you! It's is a rather difficult situation, but also pretty (as long as it's not you living it!).

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