Best Laid Plans was never really supposed to be ten chapters, but I sure got a lot out of it. Of course, several ideas got the axe, but I still liked them enough to keep them around after a a fashion.
Here are two short stories, and a handful of dialogue that wound up getting cut out.
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I just wanna dance with you )
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But then that's my newfound like for this odd couple making me biased so don't listen to me.
Honestly, I think that you could've worked in both of those scenes as bonus chapters.
They were cute and it's nice to see that even 'Cons are more than just the enemy, they're still people.
Told ya I'd probably comment. ;)
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