Best Laid Plans - Shorts and scraps

Oct 02, 2009 22:58


Best Laid Plans was never really supposed to be ten chapters, but I sure got a lot out of it.  Of course, several ideas got the axe, but I still liked them enough to keep them around after a a fashion.

Here are two short stories, and a handful of dialogue that wound up getting cut out.

I just wanna dance with you )

revenge of the fallen, demolisher, sideways, scavenger, transformers

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kenocka January 10 2010, 06:23:21 UTC
I see no reason for these two nibblets not to be included as bonus chapters for Best Laid Plans.

But then that's my newfound like for this odd couple making me biased so don't listen to me.

Honestly, I think that you could've worked in both of those scenes as bonus chapters.

They were cute and it's nice to see that even 'Cons are more than just the enemy, they're still people.

Told ya I'd probably comment. ;)

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dfastback68 January 10 2010, 18:46:26 UTC
Thanks for your comments :) I'm not always a big fan of bonus chapters on ffdotnet for some reason, and those scenes honestly didn't feel right anywhere. I liked them enough that I still wanted to share them, though, so here they are!

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kenocka January 10 2010, 23:24:32 UTC
Well I'm glad for that. I think I already said that they were cute.

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