unfinished yunho/changmin fic!

Oct 29, 2011 13:38

: how to train your zombie to not eat brains
: yunho/changmin | pg-13
: yunho adopts himself a zombie
was supposed to be for the homin comm's halloween fic contest last year. it got out of hand and i lost steam. :(

zombie training manual )

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dongbangsuju20 October 29 2011, 22:21:28 UTC
OMG OMG OMG
/flailing all over the place
OMG WHY IS THIS UNFINISHED. OMG THIS IS SO sajdhfhfg PERFECT AND GREAT AND OMG I LOVE IT. I FLAILED ALL OVER TWITTER AND OMG STILL FLAILING SOBS
PROBABLY WILL QUOTE LIKE 90% BACK TO YOU BUT IDC shajdhfgg


first: I already really like the story idea omg. I mean wtf this is so awesome ;;

“So you’re an orphan zombie?”

lmao I love how casual Yunho goes with the situation XDDDD

Changmin seemed amused. “I’ll see you around, right?”

sobs I love this and omg waylt Yunho lolol ;;

because he was sure that his new zombie friend would be his best friend in the, well, nonliving world.

sdhjashdgfg OMG THIS SOBS I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU LOOL

Jaejoong wasn’t always the most sensible, but he was the easiest to talk to and offered his own version of impartial advice

i love how you portrayed Jaejoong here tbh and I have to agree with you on this ♥

Jaejoong’s facial expression had yet to waver; Yunho flailed. “And he’s cute.”

omg omg this is so cute, really sobbing. all the conversations are so so awesome, so amazed by this ;; mainly bc I suck at writing conversations |DD haha

“I’d probably have dirty, dirty sex with him,” Yunho’s face fell, perturbed, “and then I’d shoot him in the head.”

lmao horny Jaejoong. i love him and his comments!

He’d painted them green in honor of his new “go green” attitude. Make love not war, hug trees, something like that.

sadhjjashdjgf OMG YOOCHUN OMG I LOVE THIS SOBBING. OMG THIS FIC

“It’s a zombie-eat-human-brain world out there,” he remarked flippantly. Yunho rolled his eyes. “And I’d rather it be his brains, you know, as opposed to mine.”

Yunho resisted the urge to tell Yoochun that he didn’t have any brains to be eaten anyway.

sadjjhffgsdhgf like I said I love the conversations lmao

“I thought I was your friend, too.” Junsu huffed, folded his arms across his chest and shifted his weight from one Converse-clad foot to the other, clearly pissed off. “Doesn’t my opinion matter?”

OMG I CAN TOTALLY SEE HIM BEING ALL LIKE THIS. SO JUNSU LIKE sahjdhfg ♥ HI JUNSU ;^;

Jaejoong said he looked like he just got gangbanged by bikers

I really really really love your jaejoong here, idek sdjkfg XDD

Junsu turned those brown eyes of his on Yunho, and regardless of how small they were, they still scared the shit out of him at times when leveled with a glare.

FIERCE JUNSU OMG OMG shjdhlhskjfg ♥ I LOVE THIS AND YOUR FIC AND YOU AND OMG JUNSUUUU

“I’d definitely want the epidemic to spread. How badass would it be to have a zombie apocalypse?”

omg lmao junsu YOU WOULD

Yunho would like to have gun.

“Very badass, Junsu.”

lolol I love how he reacts to this, idek. i love this whole thing. sorry this is so boring and repetitive. idk what to say more really ;;

He thought of everything that made zombies so popular to begin with.

Then he thought of Changmin.

i love your style of writing here ♥ that's all

Yunho wondered if some of the muscle tissue had begun to wear away until the brightest white of bone was all that was left beneath his tattered clothes. Yunho felt his stomach flutter with something akin to butterflies

omg this is so creepy and Yunho gets butterflies from this and this is really creepy but I love it a lot sobbing

More like a really hot girl with big boobs and a creepy pervert that lingered in the shadows. He liked that one better.

I CANNOT OMG THIS SCENE. YUNHO WAYLT OMGH shdjhdjhfg I can even imagine him like this omg why. I love it sdhjdh ♥ ♥

He didn’t look comfortable to Yunho, but Yunho wasn’t a zombie so he really couldn’t pass judgment.

i love little detail things like this one ♥

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part 2 bc I can dongbangsuju20 October 29 2011, 22:21:39 UTC


And Changmin just shook his head, dark eyes black and cold as they lingered on Yunho’s lips for the briefest of moments,

ahhhhh WHY IS THIS UNFINISHED AGAIN OMG NO LOVE SCENE BETWEEN THESE TWO WAEEEEE >>>:

“He’s a good zombie, though! You know, with a kind heart -”

“That’s a lie, technically,”(...) “I don’t have a heart.”

lmao I love this. changmin waylt omg ♥
simple things like this sahjdhfg

“Why the sudden interest in my dick?” he asked instead, and Junsu choked on the herbal tea

omg lmao omg yoochun sdhjhfg what is this. omg changmin. he is so ~good~ omg i love him

Yoochun patted his back in understanding, a concerned expression on his face as he tried his hardest to relate

omg I cannot yoochun trying to relate sdhjhfg YOOCHUN OMG

Somewhere, caught between the weeks they spent together, Changmin became restless, eyes always a hull and fingers constantly twitching.

SOBS WHY YOU END HERE WHY YOU MAKE IT UNFINISHED OMG.
I LOVE THIS. IT'S SO FUNNY AND GORGEOUS AND I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERIZATION AND OMG YOOCHUN AND JAEJOOOONG AND ZOMBIE CHANGMIN

sajdkjdfg
thank you so much for this treat ;~~~~;

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