#15. back to the basics (i.e. changmin's doorsteps);
: back to the basics (i.e. changmin's doorsteps)
: jaejoong/changmin | pg
: hyunjoong kicks jaejoong out, so he decides to crash at changmin's for a week
: for swallowtt as a birthday present ♥
( like, you have worse style than junsu )
: jaejoong/changmin | pg
: hyunjoong kicks jaejoong out, so he decides to crash at changmin's for a week
: for swallowtt as a birthday present ♥
( like, you have worse style than junsu )
/clings
will read this now, but can't promise a long comment so soon.. I'm not at home until Monday D:
(BUT SO EXCITED!!! JAEMIN ♥ )
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/holds on tight.
that's fine, bby. :D take your time. this will not be going anywhere - neither will i :)
(♥!!! JAEMIN FTW)
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I LOVE IT OKAY ♥ ;;
(I will write the longer comment laaater, maybe not even until Monday, but I even have.. negative concrit ;; but I hope that's okay XD)
/cliiiings
greeeaaat, I will hold on <33
(omg I missed reading DBSK and JaeMin and everything sfm ;; I need to reread some fics I think... probably ;; )
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♥ aww thank you! i'm happy to hear that. it's been a while :')
(okay. haha, you know i'm always here for you and waiting. take your time. and that's fine with me, as long as you're not, like, harsh and telling me to go die in a fire DD: rofl)
:3 /waits. ♥
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I like the simple and jaejoong-like way you wrote this situation and made it happen that he stays with changmin.
So, Changmin pulls away from Jaejoong, replying, “fine, fine,” and ignores the way Jaejoong’s grin makes his heart catch in his throat.
the little things are what makes your fics mostly so awesome, the beautiful details ♥
“You,” he says threateningly, fingers digging into Changmin’s sides and knees pressing uncomfortably into his hips, “have not been eating properly.”
♥ hi there jaejoong
and I think that was one of the times where I wanted to point out some crit but after the second/third read I understand everything, so no need for it :D
He always had taken it upon himself to be the most straightforward with these things; he hadn’t been their leader for nothing.
so much love for leader!Yunho ♥
Then Yunho's voice comes through again, a little tired but fond all the same, as he says, “Maybe you’re just in denial.”
love this sentence <3~ (omg I'm really bad atm ( ... )
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oh and I wanted to say that I really like your style with the week here. how you begin the paragraphs with the weekdays and all that. it gives it all a really nice overall feeling and wraps it up ♥
again sorry for taking so long to comment. I still need to write like a thousand comments and idk why I don't just do it D:
but I also have problems with fics I need to write and idk, I'm too lazy for my own good atm.
I hope you are well and happy! Take care and I love you ♥ ♥
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