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maple_mahogany July 13 2012, 15:35:27 UTC
devildoll July 17 2012, 18:54:20 UTC
*loves* I fell in love with Phil's family.

Yay! Thank you!

This is even gorgeouser on the second reading, when I was awake enough to pick up on the tense cues. *____*

Oh, you win the official No-Prize for being the first to mention they figured that out! I was intentionally tricksy about it, and figured it would probably take a re-read to realize the timing. <3 <3

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lil_1337 July 13 2012, 20:18:46 UTC
That was heartbreakingly lovely. The non sequential timeline worked really well here, it gave a sense that Phil was alive all along.

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devildoll July 17 2012, 18:56:04 UTC
Thank you so much! I wanted him to be present through the whole story, so it wasn't just about missing him--I'm so happy you said it felt that way! <3

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chicklet_girl July 13 2012, 21:19:23 UTC
IT'S REALLY UNFAIR TO MAKE THE BIRTHDAY GIRL CRY. This is so utterly lovely, I can't even single out the parts I liked best. (Yet. I may be back later.) Thank you so much for this amazing story! *hugs*

For the lovely chicklet_girl on her birthday, because I was never so proud as when I got an email from her saying, "Um, so. Clint/Coulson. Tell me more!" <3 <3

Of course I went in that direction; it's a sniper and a federal agent. *g*

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devildoll July 17 2012, 18:57:16 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! *hugs hugs and more hugs*

Of course I went in that direction; it's a sniper and a federal agent. *g*

Hee! Yes!

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cailamaia July 14 2012, 16:19:27 UTC
Mmmmm delicious angst. Love the ending. And Phil's family is awesome.

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devildoll July 18 2012, 17:33:13 UTC
Thank you so much! Creating backstory is always so fun, but you don't want to bore everyone with OCs, so I love hearing you enjoyed Phil's family! <3

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weaverandom July 16 2012, 09:37:21 UTC
Oh man, this is amazing. I love it so much, this is the best thing. I don't even ship Clint/Coulson but NOW I DO

I have read this like twice over the past couple days and it just makes me so happy.

*shiny eyes all over the place*

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devildoll July 18 2012, 17:34:14 UTC
OH HO HO! Nothing is better than hearing you've converted someone with your story! *fist pump*

Thanks for giving this one a chance, and for leaving me this comment, which made my day. <3

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