FIC: Proof (SGA) Sheppard/McKay

[devildoll]

It's hwmitzy's birthday! I wanted to write something silly for her that would make her laugh, and...well. God, this premise is so thin. Do not attempt to poke holes in it -- you will fall right through and hurt yourself.

Title: Proof
Summary: "We had a fight and he dumped me." Foofy humor.
Author: Devil Doll
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: Sheppard

Comments

[amezri]

Okay, how could I not love this? John being all drunken and misunderstanding Rodney and the fight that never happened! And Rodney being his usual self, hunting John down and being annoyed that John is in a bar trying to pick up bar sluts! XD And... you made Aimiee likeable. Heh.

For this, you get the bear icon.

[jissa]

ZOMG! I *love* your icon!

Bears! Rodney and John!! Nothing could be cooler!!

[amezri]

Thank you ^^ I love my bears. I blame cassiejamie for the whole Build A Bear obsession. *g*

[devildoll]

Okay, how could I not love this?

Whoohoo!

And Rodney being his usual self, hunting John down and being annoyed that John is in a bar trying to pick up bar sluts!

Hee! You totally know Rodney is *never* going to let John forget this.

And... you made Aimiee likeable. Heh.

Whew. I didn't want her to be lame or irritating or completely one-dimensional, but there's only so much you can do with an OC without wasting valuable story time on her. Hee.

For this, you get the bear icon.

Yay!

[musesfool]

*snugs*

It's adorkable.

[devildoll]

Bweeheehee! That's David Hewlett's favorite fan description of Rodney. You so totally nailed it.

*wxwx*

[musesfool]

Wow. four pages of comments. Go you!

*wxwx*

[brown_betty]

This is a thing of beauty. I'm not sure what my favourite part is, I just love John's slightly hashed mental processes.

[devildoll]

I just love John's slightly hashed mental processes.

Ah, good. When I sent to beta I was like, okay, it needs to be clear that he's drunk, and also slightly stupid about his feelings, but it can't be annoying to read. So yay for your reaction. Yay!

[groovekittie]

I don't normally read John/Rodney, but becuase it was written by you, I had to read it. And boy, am I ever glad I did! This was AWESOME! I loved it! You are a *master* and the characters were spot on!!

And the over-used girl thing is why I rarely read slash. For some reason, the characters get overly feminized. *sigh*

[devildoll]

but becuase it was written by you, I had to read it. And boy, am I ever glad I did! This was AWESOME! I loved it! You are a *master* and the characters were spot on!!

Awww, thank you!

And the over-used girl thing is why I rarely read slash. For some reason, the characters get overly feminized. *sigh*

Luckily, there isn't much of that in the McShep I've read. I hate the weepy girly men. Ew!

[tigs]

This was so. much. fun! So many lines were quotable, John's freaking out was very much something I could see him doing, Rodney was fabulous. I just really liked it a lot.

[devildoll]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and really appreciate the comment.