Minific: Panic

[deuxexmycroft]

Pairing: Gen
Rating: R
Warnings: blood and guns and panicky John

I can never get in John's head, so I saw this prompt on the kinkmeme and thought I'd bash something out and see what happened.

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Comments

[hestia14]

What was that noise? I think It was my heartstrings being played.

(I kinda feel like a stalker for commenting on almost every story. Just know these actions are done with admiration ^_^.)

[deuxexmycroft]

It's not stalkery, comments keep me going :D

Thank you!

[morganstuart]

Wow! Incredibly intense. Great descriptions. I was holding my breath!

[deuxexmycroft]

Thanks very much <3

[mustangwomant]

Wonderfully intense! You've created excellent imagery and relay so much with few words. Sherlock's panic is palpable especially when he demands, "Stop bleeding, John!"

I think you did a great job getting into John's head; the flashback, the desperate feeling of "not again" - brilliant!

OMG! I hope you're planning to continue this!

[deuxexmycroft]

Wow, thank you very much! I'm so happy my trip into John's head rang true to you. I've got a couple of WIPs I'm doing on the meme right now, but once they're done I might return to some of my own stuff. Again, thanks!

[luthier]

Oh, ouch, argh. This was for the panicking prompt, wasn't it? It's wonderful and brutal and so, so real. It's brilliant how real this is. Thank you!

[deuxexmycroft]

Yes it was! Thanks so much <3

[cccahill18]

You've done very well with a panicky Sherlock and a scared John. The fear was certainly palpable!