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deuxexmycroft

Fic: Multiples Part 2

Jun 02, 2011 12:28

( The unanticipated wait has Sherlock drumming his fingers on the desktop in frustration. )

jim/seb, kinkmeme, omc/john, sherlock/john, fanfic

Comments 40

jesse_kips June 2 2011, 01:26:56 UTC

Oh my god, you managed a happy ending. Well, not happy, but hopeful and much better than I was dreading. Perfect fit for this story.

I actually tracked this on the meme, but had to stop following it after a short while because I couldn't handle it! You wrote this so well- the injuries were vivid and horrifying, and the characters were pitch perfect, and I genuinely had to stop reading until I could check the end to make sure it wasn't going to get a million times worse. So, yes. Please take my lack of ability to follow this as a huge compliment!

Very, very well done.

deuxexmycroft June 2 2011, 02:03:35 UTC

Oh, wow! Well, I'm glad you came back to it then. Thank you very much!

ktbean June 2 2011, 05:32:37 UTC

My God this was horrible. Your torture scenes are SCARY and totally in character. I remember reading this on the meme and being all, ARGH run away!! Must go and look at cute kitty pictures now.
Question:
Is it wrong to compare you to Stephen King?

deuxexmycroft June 2 2011, 07:15:42 UTC

Aaahhh that's a very flattering comparison that I really don't deserve! Thank you very much, for the compliment and for reading.

Im so needing therapy after this aubre_rose June 2 2011, 06:19:47 UTC

...but in a good way. Goodness, that had to be the toughest thing I've had to read in forever. Suffering from insomnia tonight and now have nightmare fodder,kthnx.
Seriously, was tempted to not finish, but got addicted. Nicely done. Oh, id love to see an epilogue. Nice job keeping the boys in character. I was expecting john to freak upon waking up. Love that he just seemed to know this was a possibility of what he signed up for.

Re: Im so needing therapy after this deuxexmycroft June 2 2011, 07:24:26 UTC

Ha! Sorry. I'm very glad you finished, though.

Not sure what I'd put in an epilogue, but thank you.

jerel June 2 2011, 23:33:33 UTC

Holy shit.

Truly horrifying stuff. I've got the chills. But so well written. Wow.

kai_pon June 3 2011, 14:47:43 UTC

"We're going to play a game."
That sounds like Sherlock is jigsaw O_o

Quite a disgusting read, but (as terrible as it is) I enjoyed every bit of it because it's very well written.