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[desfinado]

Title: Proof
Author: desfinado
Reader: shiningartifact (posted here at her journal)
Pairing: Gerard/Frank (Lindsey/Gerard, Jamia/Frank)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6,400
Runtime: 40m 00s
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Frank won't stop taking pictures in the studio while the band records their new album.
Notes: Completed for the 2011 pod_together

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[shiningartifact]

And then - yes. When Frank's discovered, he feels WEIRD. As he should. And Gerard feels kind of embarrassed. And it almost almost gets laughed off and they move on, but Frank says the magic words I can make anything look good, and Gerard CAN NOT RESIST. This is the greatest, and the way you do it is so incredible. That they realistically go through all of these emotions and then end up where they end up. And it's exactly right that they're tired and punchy and it's the middle of the night, because there's no way any of this would have happened otherwise. But things HAPPEN in the middle of the night when you're exhausted but happy and adrenaline-filled. IDK. I totally get why Frank stays and takes that first shot, you know? And that was a hard thing to get across, and you did it so well.

Frank doesn't notice he's licked his lips until he feels his own breath ghost across them.

This is just one of those things that you do so well. It's beautiful and REAL.

I love that the first time Frank directs Gerard to move a specific way, it's completely unconscious and uncalculated. That makes it so much more real. And I fucking LOVE Gerard's reaction. He maybe thinks it's a little funny, but he KNOWS this, knows how to pose. And god how is this so hot:

Gerard drops his hand to his lap again and slips the other one up to curl around the back of his neck, elbow bent. His eyes slip shut and he breathes, slow and deep.

GOD. The whole thing is so charged and fucking HOT AS HELL.

he's sweating in his hoodie now but can't think of a way to take it off that wouldn't look like stripping

LOVE THIS. How do you THINK of these things? Because of COURSE. He'd be hot, but he would totally look like he was taking things to a new level if he tried to take it off, if he drew that much attention to himself.

And oh god oh god. The way he waits for Frank to tell him to touch himself. *______* Amazing. And I love the way Frank sort of forgets to look down at his dick at first - he's concentrating on the changes in his face.

Frank makes a noise in the back of his throat and can't even get his shit together to snap a picture when Gerard rubs a wide, pale thumb across the head, smearing it shiny with precome.

...this is one of the actual hottest things I've ever read, and I don't even know why, exactly? Just, that Frank's totally undone by it, by watching Gerard DO this.

He catches glimpses of his own fingers whenever he pulls back to look at the screen and the inked skin seems weird, like it doesn't belong in this moment, like it's not about him right now.

I fucking love this SO much. Because it's totally true that he might think that way. I love that that's the ONLY glimpse we get of Frank's tattoos the whole time, and that they're kind of an unwelcome distraction for him.

Gerard moans immediately, palm rubbing up and down at the back of his head to mess his hair up

Messing up his own hair = always awesome. Again, it's one of those things you do when nobody's watching, you know? It shows how far gone Gerard is in this. There's more of that type of thing later, and every time something like that happens, it's insanely hot.