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[derryderrydown]

Title: Suck You Dry
Pairing: John/Dean
Rating: Adult
Summary: Demons Made Them Do It. It's a totally valid summary.
Notes: Thanks to brown_betty for American Canadian that-side-of-the-Atlantic checking. Any remaining faults are entirely my own.

Comments

[brown_betty]

Moral of the story: Everyone who Dean loves will find him disappointing and leave him.

[derryderrydown]

And he won't even get an orgasm out of it.

[rosekay]

Oh, this was lovely. I like the relatively spare style you use here, and John's matter of fact POV. The ending was especially effective. Great job.

[derryderrydown]

Thanks!

[embroiderama]

Wow. Damn. That was somehow simultaneously very sad, tremendously fucked up and kind of hot. Excellent story!

[derryderrydown]

Exactly the vibe I was going for. *g* I love it when a story comes out just right.

[missyjack]

what a fantastic story. Emotionally powerful - wonderful John voice. And it was hot and it had Latin!

[derryderrydown]

The Latin's all courtesy of Supercanon, I'm afraid - I've forgotten pretty much every word I ever knew.

Thanks!

[phantomas]

Wow. I really like how you have them go into nasty, wrong country, and yet, in True Winchester Style, they never talk about it - John's pov is very effective here, and his complete reluctance to discuss the problems with Dean, and Dean's total trust in his father...and the bourbon.
Thank you.

[derryderrydown]

Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.