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The Psyblade began writing the Eragon "fan"fiction. Why is he doing this? In all honesty, he wants justice to be done. He is positively jealous from the writer, who published and gained millions out of a poorly-written book with stryeotypic races, flat characters, and a non-sensual plot. Is this a personal effort to keep him from going insane? Probably.
-- Hand of Freedom --
I'm fixing up the characters primarily. Arya (who was the WORST character by far, being superficial, Damsil In Distress #192, and somewhat a sign of anti-femenism (Yes, you heard me right) ) needed it most. Making her more human (Relatively) by showing an actual distress beacon there, and how it scarred her.
Next, I'm elaborating the entire world: The King is the antagonist: Why? Why'd he do all this and that, and why'd he become king--is it just ruling? He and 13 nobodies (relatively) took out an age-old order, but he can't capture behind the Horadric Desert (Name sounds familiar...Diablo?) with a few shock troops and decent coverage--or just go through the woods? The Elves are terrifyed of him: they won't do anything.
I made a whole new plot. A real enemy, gave everyone a chance at "redemption", and made sense of a lot of things. I'm not trying to humble myself, thus I'd say I did a good job.
Of course, I won't summerize it here--I hope I didn't already.
Updates will come as they come. *Points at TJ* They're short, too. You cannot escape this story.
-- Hand of Freedom --
I'm fixing up the characters primarily. Arya (who was the WORST character by far, being superficial, Damsil In Distress #192, and somewhat a sign of anti-femenism (Yes, you heard me right) ) needed it most. Making her more human (Relatively) by showing an actual distress beacon there, and how it scarred her.
Next, I'm elaborating the entire world: The King is the antagonist: Why? Why'd he do all this and that, and why'd he become king--is it just ruling? He and 13 nobodies (relatively) took out an age-old order, but he can't capture behind the Horadric Desert (Name sounds familiar...Diablo?) with a few shock troops and decent coverage--or just go through the woods? The Elves are terrifyed of him: they won't do anything.
I made a whole new plot. A real enemy, gave everyone a chance at "redemption", and made sense of a lot of things. I'm not trying to humble myself, thus I'd say I did a good job.
Of course, I won't summerize it here--I hope I didn't already.
Updates will come as they come. *Points at TJ* They're short, too. You cannot escape this story.