Dollhouse fic - Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas; pg-13; Chapter 8

[derevko_child]

Title: Enemies of My Soul, Conspirators in Pajamas (An Epic Alias-Dollhouse Crossover)
Rating: PG-13 for language, violence... and um, sexual situations?
Characters: Adelle, Dominic, Topher, Claire, Vaughn, Marshall
Pairing: Adelle DeWitt/Laurence Dominic; Jack Bristow/Irina Derevko
Disclaimer: I do not own Dollhouse. Or Alias.
Notes: Spoilers for

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[demonqueen666]

Adelle closes her eyes and sighs, “Why am I even attempting to argue you with you?” she asks, “For all I know, breakfast is all ready there, waiting.”

Oh god, they're so married. *snerk fit*

It's nice that they've gotten to the point where they can have quiet little conversations like that. Now they just need to make out.

And, ha! I'm so not suprised that Dominic's excited to be going over a cliff. He's got a bit of the show off-y daredevil in him XD

[derevko_child]

The alias is rubbing off on them, I guess. Hopefully they get to the actual joys of their cover stories. Hee.

Thanks for commenting XD

[morgan72uk]

I really liked the change in their interaction; very domestic. And Topher was funny.
But I felt Adelle's loneliness when she answered his question and I am curious about whether he is going to work out how she feels about plan B.
And I'm wondering about the rest of the plot now, what is this mission really about?
Basically I'm still intrigued!

- let me know if you still need a beta.

[derevko_child]

I'm glad you liked the change in their interaction.

I am curious about whether he is going to work out how she feels about plan B.

Hee. I already have this worked out. XDDDD

Thank you for commenting. I'm also thinking that I'll go beta-less for this one, since it's going to end soon (around 5-6ish chapters more to go...). I need a beta-reader for the next story, though. Maybe I'll just PM you?

[morgan72uk]

feel free to pm me - though that might be a problem if you are assuming there is something on Livejournal I should know how to use.

[webeh]

She doesn’t tell him that she’s terrified of the thought of jumping off a cliff.

I love that you're totally going with plan B. And, during the dark while you're at it. Very cool. :)

Also, heee Marshall! I heart him.

[derevko_child]

Well, ever since I started out, I always knew they're gonna go to Plan B. I crossovered Dollhouse with Alias, it's bound to happen. Lulz.

I heart Marshall too! <3<3<3

[webeh]

I was suddenly reminded of that scene in the last season of Alias where a very pregnant Sydney jumped off a cliff with Vaughn.