Well, so my essay was the best thing mankind has ever seen. My teacher actually asked me if I was secretly native (even though my prounuciation is not even close to that) or if I had been living in an English speaking country etc.. I rule. Rico doesn't, as seen in this picture:
Now look at that. In the beginning she wrote a 6, but it looks like she changed her mind and made a 3 out of it. Then she turned it into a 5. Last but not least, she just wrote a 4 beneath that "thing".
Damn, I want more readers. More people to admire me.