TW beta? or just reader to see what's off

[denyce]

Hiya I'm about to leave for work - I wrote a TW one-shot just under 1k. I'm sorta ok with it, but the ending seems off, IDK. Anyhoo anyone available for quick look-see? Its gen Parrish's pov, of father-son, Stiles asking his father to do the unthinkable, break the law. It's a challenge bit due tomorrow. I can send it off to you tonight, but would need it back by tomorrow early evening.

Thanks in advance!